for Spiraling Shark11/10 c37 Guest
I have ideas of how powerful Naruto's ship, Nautilus. would be once the shipwrights of Water 7 are done with it. With Vegapunk's blueprints which Black Jack Lee has stolen, the Nautilus would be designated as a submarine ship, as Naruto is inspired by Trafalgar D. Water Law's Polar Tang,. Yet the ship is built to be more combative and threatening than the Polar Tang as it was equipped with ramming prow to puncture ships below the waterline at maximum speed. It is equipped with Bubble shield technology to protect the ship from vast amount of damage and Beam Laser weapon, firing laser blasts powerful enough to destroy Marine battleship.
I have ideas of how powerful Naruto's ship, Nautilus. would be once the shipwrights of Water 7 are done with it. With Vegapunk's blueprints which Black Jack Lee has stolen, the Nautilus would be designated as a submarine ship, as Naruto is inspired by Trafalgar D. Water Law's Polar Tang,. Yet the ship is built to be more combative and threatening than the Polar Tang as it was equipped with ramming prow to puncture ships below the waterline at maximum speed. It is equipped with Bubble shield technology to protect the ship from vast amount of damage and Beam Laser weapon, firing laser blasts powerful enough to destroy Marine battleship.
9/24 c37 SlyFox9
Oh man this is going to awesome. The Enies Lobby arc is one of my most favorite arcs of One Piece. I can’t wait to see everyone kick some major ass and their rescue attempt.
Oh man this is going to awesome. The Enies Lobby arc is one of my most favorite arcs of One Piece. I can’t wait to see everyone kick some major ass and their rescue attempt.
9/15 c37 
25NewMystery356
Naruto getting Nero right between the legs was a laugh riot~ As for the potential Buster Call, I wonder what Naruto will do when they’re surrounded… Then again, things could go completely lop-sided.
25NewMystery356Naruto getting Nero right between the legs was a laugh riot~ As for the potential Buster Call, I wonder what Naruto will do when they’re surrounded… Then again, things could go completely lop-sided.
8/23 c37 Guest
This is a future scene I thought you should like for your future chapters:
Everyone was utterly shocked, pirate and marine alike, when Naruto slapped Robin in the face.
"What the hell?" Spandam cried out in shock.
"Hey buster!" Franky angrily yelled at Naruto. "What the hell-"
"I am sorry I hit you Robin, and I hate hitting women" Naruto said to a stunned Robin. "But you need to wake up from that self-guilt. It's pissing me off!"
"I need the Nico Robin back." Naruto stated out loud. "The only woman that scared the shit out of the World government. I know the World government is afraid of you because they're trying to use every dirty trick in the book to break you! But you can't let them win, no matter what!"
"Bad things happen to good people like you," Naruto continue. "Nami, Vivi...even me...but we don't let it break us! You can't let them break you! Do you understand me?
The moment the Buster Call begins Nico Robin broken down in terror like a little girl who is afraid of begins alone in the dark. Yet Naruto's harsh and piercing words seem to had a huge effect on Robin than that slap to the face he gave her. Fact, it seems start a Fire inside her, that was burning her brighter and hotter than before. Adding into flames were painful memories of how she came this far and the memories of those she loved and care, who sacrificed everything to ensure she survived.
Rising up, a renew and more determined Nico Robin smiled and says*Thank you Naruto."
This is a future scene I thought you should like for your future chapters:
Everyone was utterly shocked, pirate and marine alike, when Naruto slapped Robin in the face.
"What the hell?" Spandam cried out in shock.
"Hey buster!" Franky angrily yelled at Naruto. "What the hell-"
"I am sorry I hit you Robin, and I hate hitting women" Naruto said to a stunned Robin. "But you need to wake up from that self-guilt. It's pissing me off!"
"I need the Nico Robin back." Naruto stated out loud. "The only woman that scared the shit out of the World government. I know the World government is afraid of you because they're trying to use every dirty trick in the book to break you! But you can't let them win, no matter what!"
"Bad things happen to good people like you," Naruto continue. "Nami, Vivi...even me...but we don't let it break us! You can't let them break you! Do you understand me?
The moment the Buster Call begins Nico Robin broken down in terror like a little girl who is afraid of begins alone in the dark. Yet Naruto's harsh and piercing words seem to had a huge effect on Robin than that slap to the face he gave her. Fact, it seems start a Fire inside her, that was burning her brighter and hotter than before. Adding into flames were painful memories of how she came this far and the memories of those she loved and care, who sacrificed everything to ensure she survived.
Rising up, a renew and more determined Nico Robin smiled and says*Thank you Naruto."
8/6 c37 DraconesUzumaki
two things I was not expecting from this chapter: 1) A Sarge cameo. 2) using technical train lingo like the wheel arrangement of 4-4-0 and referring to the nose of the train as the smokebox. I do like how you're keeping the stakes even for both the Ocean Sword and Straw Hat crews. both had 3 taken, one of whom is resigned to their fate, both had one person get aboard, and both got one person out. I'm waiting to see what happens with Kotetsu and Magara. Something's different this time. He's gotten blood on his face twice, but he hasn't flipped his lid. He's twitchy, seemingly reaching for the sword he doesn't have, and smiling like Magara without being him. I eagerly await the next installment. It's really taking me back. I read the Eines Lobby arc almost a decade ago (god that feels weird to say) and I had forgotten things like the chef and T-Bone.
two things I was not expecting from this chapter: 1) A Sarge cameo. 2) using technical train lingo like the wheel arrangement of 4-4-0 and referring to the nose of the train as the smokebox. I do like how you're keeping the stakes even for both the Ocean Sword and Straw Hat crews. both had 3 taken, one of whom is resigned to their fate, both had one person get aboard, and both got one person out. I'm waiting to see what happens with Kotetsu and Magara. Something's different this time. He's gotten blood on his face twice, but he hasn't flipped his lid. He's twitchy, seemingly reaching for the sword he doesn't have, and smiling like Magara without being him. I eagerly await the next installment. It's really taking me back. I read the Eines Lobby arc almost a decade ago (god that feels weird to say) and I had forgotten things like the chef and T-Bone.
8/4 c37 3coldblue2015
Thanks for the update!
Again, sorry about the late reviews...I'm not having a good time handling myself lately. Life is changing and times are hard, but enough about me whining.
Captain Naruto Uzumaki:
I love the fact Naruto treats Gin biting someone neck off by putting salt water to wash out his mouth, like parent/guardian cleaning a filthy mouth of child. Honestly...once this story crossover with "Naruto", Wanze life was basically over especially what he did to Ramen. Really the dialogue with CP9 was great and we find out Naruto REALLY good at getting under Rob Lucci and CP9 crew skin about how they are no different from Criminals and that they are worse than Pirates at time. We got Nero trying to save face with CP9, but Robb was not having that and basically pissed off the Naruto and company with how he acted. I kind love the emotional moment with Kotetsu or Magura or whoever it is, because Naruto showed loyalty to someone who is consider mentally unstable and yet knows the crime was more complicated along with their journey meaning something. Also love how Naruto helping Nico Robin out because of the Black 'Jack' Lee treasure and buying/renovating their old ship into something brand new! Naruto remembers people who helped him out and helps when they are at the lowest moment. It was great that Naruto, Sanji and company got smart with getting rid of Vice-Admirals, but now...They are ending towards Impel Down, along with the Straw Hats...Naruto breaking out his Saibannin Kayiouumi aka Anchor Axe so most likely there were be MORE blood spilled and higher bounties along side the Straw Hats, the Ocean Swords Pirates are going to have fierce reputation that will make pirates like Captain Eustace Kid pause given who Captain Naruto Uzumaki is.
Impel Down is having TWO upcoming powerhouse Pirate Crews coming their crewmates!
Questions
1) Is Nero dead or will he get revenge on Rob Lucci and CP9 for trying to kill him?
2) Are you hinting that Naruto and Gin will possible use Busoshoku Hai on Saibannin Kayiouumi and the unnamed daggers that were taken by Gin?
3) Can we expect Naruto to go up against Multiple Vice-Admirals or will Naruto, Gin and third crewmate fight some Vice-Admirals, which would give the Ocean Sword Pirates fearsome reputation?
4) Will Samehada come into this story and will Naruto wield Samehada to enhance his Haki and Water Manipulation?
Suggestions
1) I hope not. Kind of hope Nero does something more in this story and even if he just gets revenge, it kind of impressive if Nero becomes a thorn in the World Government/CP9 reputation. Honestly, it seem like Nero was doing lot dirty work while most CP9 were undercover...so Nero might have lot dirty/bloody evidence he can use against CP9 and World Government a bad reputation. Even exposing that CP9 actually exist with connections with the World Government would be good about revenge for Nero.
2) I kind of look forward to that! I honestly see Naruto pulling something similar to Zorro did with cutting a Mountain Size Stone Giant...I kind of see Naruto using Saibannin Kayiouumi to same extent, but greater Destructive Potential to CLEAVE a Large Island or Continent...which leaves Canyon size slash to show Naruto changing the Environment with battles. Gin, I hope does something interesting with those Daggers, but they also get a name. Kind of like Gin gains more power from training with Naruto, but more speed/reflex from training with Kotetsu. Sort of like Gin well balanced, but his Busoshoku Haki to HURT Logia Devil Fruit users and leave lasting scars on his enemies.
3)...I kind of want it to be Naruto, Gin and Carmen vs Vice Admirals! I know, why Carmen? I feel like Carmen fighting Vice Admiral would help CEMENT Carmen loyalty and change in her life by fighting Marines/World Government. Plus, more strong Female Characters. Anyway, I figure Naruto and Gin would most likely fight a Vice Admirals and REALLY make they're bounties sky-rocket to extent...Because I don't think Naruto and Gin will try to leave Vice Admirals alive especially if they are horrible people and treat their subordinates like tools and not people.
4) At this point...Yeah, let Naruto have Samehada. Kind of something he can take when returns home has to leave. Also, Samehada has to LIKE Naruto Haki or else be rejected...Still, Naruto and Samehada would be good match! Kind of wish Kisame was in this story. Anway, Naruto having Samehada could expand Naruto destructive potential, Drain Haki, hurt Logia Devil Fruit users, and expand Naruto Fishmen abilities of Water Manipulation to EXTREME levels to actually turn Deserts into Swamps or new Oasis's because of the amount water Naruto AND Samehada can generate/control/use.
Keep up the good work, stay safe, and stay healthy!
3coldblue2015Thanks for the update!
Again, sorry about the late reviews...I'm not having a good time handling myself lately. Life is changing and times are hard, but enough about me whining.
Captain Naruto Uzumaki:
I love the fact Naruto treats Gin biting someone neck off by putting salt water to wash out his mouth, like parent/guardian cleaning a filthy mouth of child. Honestly...once this story crossover with "Naruto", Wanze life was basically over especially what he did to Ramen. Really the dialogue with CP9 was great and we find out Naruto REALLY good at getting under Rob Lucci and CP9 crew skin about how they are no different from Criminals and that they are worse than Pirates at time. We got Nero trying to save face with CP9, but Robb was not having that and basically pissed off the Naruto and company with how he acted. I kind love the emotional moment with Kotetsu or Magura or whoever it is, because Naruto showed loyalty to someone who is consider mentally unstable and yet knows the crime was more complicated along with their journey meaning something. Also love how Naruto helping Nico Robin out because of the Black 'Jack' Lee treasure and buying/renovating their old ship into something brand new! Naruto remembers people who helped him out and helps when they are at the lowest moment. It was great that Naruto, Sanji and company got smart with getting rid of Vice-Admirals, but now...They are ending towards Impel Down, along with the Straw Hats...Naruto breaking out his Saibannin Kayiouumi aka Anchor Axe so most likely there were be MORE blood spilled and higher bounties along side the Straw Hats, the Ocean Swords Pirates are going to have fierce reputation that will make pirates like Captain Eustace Kid pause given who Captain Naruto Uzumaki is.
Impel Down is having TWO upcoming powerhouse Pirate Crews coming their crewmates!
Questions
1) Is Nero dead or will he get revenge on Rob Lucci and CP9 for trying to kill him?
2) Are you hinting that Naruto and Gin will possible use Busoshoku Hai on Saibannin Kayiouumi and the unnamed daggers that were taken by Gin?
3) Can we expect Naruto to go up against Multiple Vice-Admirals or will Naruto, Gin and third crewmate fight some Vice-Admirals, which would give the Ocean Sword Pirates fearsome reputation?
4) Will Samehada come into this story and will Naruto wield Samehada to enhance his Haki and Water Manipulation?
Suggestions
1) I hope not. Kind of hope Nero does something more in this story and even if he just gets revenge, it kind of impressive if Nero becomes a thorn in the World Government/CP9 reputation. Honestly, it seem like Nero was doing lot dirty work while most CP9 were undercover...so Nero might have lot dirty/bloody evidence he can use against CP9 and World Government a bad reputation. Even exposing that CP9 actually exist with connections with the World Government would be good about revenge for Nero.
2) I kind of look forward to that! I honestly see Naruto pulling something similar to Zorro did with cutting a Mountain Size Stone Giant...I kind of see Naruto using Saibannin Kayiouumi to same extent, but greater Destructive Potential to CLEAVE a Large Island or Continent...which leaves Canyon size slash to show Naruto changing the Environment with battles. Gin, I hope does something interesting with those Daggers, but they also get a name. Kind of like Gin gains more power from training with Naruto, but more speed/reflex from training with Kotetsu. Sort of like Gin well balanced, but his Busoshoku Haki to HURT Logia Devil Fruit users and leave lasting scars on his enemies.
3)...I kind of want it to be Naruto, Gin and Carmen vs Vice Admirals! I know, why Carmen? I feel like Carmen fighting Vice Admiral would help CEMENT Carmen loyalty and change in her life by fighting Marines/World Government. Plus, more strong Female Characters. Anyway, I figure Naruto and Gin would most likely fight a Vice Admirals and REALLY make they're bounties sky-rocket to extent...Because I don't think Naruto and Gin will try to leave Vice Admirals alive especially if they are horrible people and treat their subordinates like tools and not people.
4) At this point...Yeah, let Naruto have Samehada. Kind of something he can take when returns home has to leave. Also, Samehada has to LIKE Naruto Haki or else be rejected...Still, Naruto and Samehada would be good match! Kind of wish Kisame was in this story. Anway, Naruto having Samehada could expand Naruto destructive potential, Drain Haki, hurt Logia Devil Fruit users, and expand Naruto Fishmen abilities of Water Manipulation to EXTREME levels to actually turn Deserts into Swamps or new Oasis's because of the amount water Naruto AND Samehada can generate/control/use.
Keep up the good work, stay safe, and stay healthy!