for Veritas Vos Liberabit2/9 c8 Limalimon16
Hay una sola cosa que me molesta de este fic y es el principio, casi dejo de leerlo por eso. Tom y Harry 'se enamoran' en cuanto deciden hacer una alianza, no tiene sentido y me habría gustado que se desarrolara mejor el comienzo de su relación
Hay una sola cosa que me molesta de este fic y es el principio, casi dejo de leerlo por eso. Tom y Harry 'se enamoran' en cuanto deciden hacer una alianza, no tiene sentido y me habría gustado que se desarrolara mejor el comienzo de su relación
10/27/2021 c1 Lovedweller
Excellent! Bravo! I absolutely loved it though even I wanted to rip Dumblefuck apart. This is definitely one of my favorites.
Excellent! Bravo! I absolutely loved it though even I wanted to rip Dumblefuck apart. This is definitely one of my favorites.
3/18/2021 c8 
16SilentSnowLeopardNinja
I'm glad they had a happy ending. Its bananas that Dumbledore is so insane he still doesn't understand how and why he was in the wrong.
16SilentSnowLeopardNinjaI'm glad they had a happy ending. Its bananas that Dumbledore is so insane he still doesn't understand how and why he was in the wrong.
3/18/2021 c7 SilentSnowLeopardNinja
I don't understand why it took so long to get the help of Albus' brother after finding out Dumbledore blood was needed if the guy was readily available and willing to help. I also don't understand why Voldy didn't bring a big group to storm the place to get back Harry. He even just left Dumbles on the floor under a basic spell that could wear off b4 he returns to imprison/torture him.
I don't understand why it took so long to get the help of Albus' brother after finding out Dumbledore blood was needed if the guy was readily available and willing to help. I also don't understand why Voldy didn't bring a big group to storm the place to get back Harry. He even just left Dumbles on the floor under a basic spell that could wear off b4 he returns to imprison/torture him.
3/14/2021 c4 SilentSnowLeopardNinja
Oomph. Continuity problems suddenly. I enjoy the light hearted silly humor but...wasn't it established that Hermione was also a fake friend being paid with his money like the youngest Weasleys b4 her parents forced her to leave Hogwarts? Didn't he hate her too and was relieved she was gone so he didn't have to deal with her as well as them? Why would he trust her now? Why would the twins potentially break Harry's faith to tell Hermione secret things? It's NEWTs time, which means its near the end of the year right? Yet they haven't even begun to destroy Dumbles reputation. There were other things but I can't remember at the moment, too sleepy.
Oomph. Continuity problems suddenly. I enjoy the light hearted silly humor but...wasn't it established that Hermione was also a fake friend being paid with his money like the youngest Weasleys b4 her parents forced her to leave Hogwarts? Didn't he hate her too and was relieved she was gone so he didn't have to deal with her as well as them? Why would he trust her now? Why would the twins potentially break Harry's faith to tell Hermione secret things? It's NEWTs time, which means its near the end of the year right? Yet they haven't even begun to destroy Dumbles reputation. There were other things but I can't remember at the moment, too sleepy.
1/5/2021 c8 Kushka
Great story
Great story
8/17/2020 c8 8HarryPotterFangirl85
I enjoyed this story and was amused by many of the scenes and interactions. That being said, I feel like my head is spinning because the story just didn’t feel logical and if felt almost like a parody, granted I get that mpreg is a physical impossibility, which is itself illogical, unless said male had a sex change and used to be a female and kept their female reproductive system (I remember seeing that on the news years ago). Maybe it was a parody and I didn’t notice it when I downloaded it. I don’t normally do parodies because they are more nonsense than I can generally handle. Anyways, I strangely found myself wishing this story was a bit longer, even with the parody feel of it.
8HarryPotterFangirl85I enjoyed this story and was amused by many of the scenes and interactions. That being said, I feel like my head is spinning because the story just didn’t feel logical and if felt almost like a parody, granted I get that mpreg is a physical impossibility, which is itself illogical, unless said male had a sex change and used to be a female and kept their female reproductive system (I remember seeing that on the news years ago). Maybe it was a parody and I didn’t notice it when I downloaded it. I don’t normally do parodies because they are more nonsense than I can generally handle. Anyways, I strangely found myself wishing this story was a bit longer, even with the parody feel of it.
10/7/2018 c1 1TheBlueMoonRose
on potter new looks, on the shoes... ive seen those shoes and there fucken ugly, why not just have him wear all out black converse?!
and the shirt! just have him wear black or even forset green v-neck shirt...
the skinny jeans are awesome put in, i think harry would look good in skinny jeans, nothing in Gothic though, i can see harry dressing emoish BUT not goth...
1TheBlueMoonRoseon potter new looks, on the shoes... ive seen those shoes and there fucken ugly, why not just have him wear all out black converse?!
and the shirt! just have him wear black or even forset green v-neck shirt...
the skinny jeans are awesome put in, i think harry would look good in skinny jeans, nothing in Gothic though, i can see harry dressing emoish BUT not goth...
10/24/2017 c1 DJ8210
Too simple. Everything goes too easily, making this boring. Even the reactions are too far fetched, nothing like the actual characters.
Too simple. Everything goes too easily, making this boring. Even the reactions are too far fetched, nothing like the actual characters.