11/14/2011 c6 1The Dark Lady Voldemort666
I have just found this story and all I have to say is I think it is wonderful. I like that you write long chapters and that you can show different sides to Tom and Harry without changing him from being a dark lord. I also think that you should have had Harry a little madder at Remus then you did. I think he was way to forgiving. I mean Remus may have been under spells and stuff but it would still have hurt Harry and having him just come back like nothing happen is just kind of wrong to me. However I still like the story and will keep reading as long as you update.
I have just found this story and all I have to say is I think it is wonderful. I like that you write long chapters and that you can show different sides to Tom and Harry without changing him from being a dark lord. I also think that you should have had Harry a little madder at Remus then you did. I think he was way to forgiving. I mean Remus may have been under spells and stuff but it would still have hurt Harry and having him just come back like nothing happen is just kind of wrong to me. However I still like the story and will keep reading as long as you update.
11/12/2011 c5 MiniMinx
This story is amazing. I've read stories with a similar plot-line but this one is just...wow. A few punctuation mistakes, nothing big of course, but otherwise it's a brilliant story.
This story is amazing. I've read stories with a similar plot-line but this one is just...wow. A few punctuation mistakes, nothing big of course, but otherwise it's a brilliant story.
9/25/2011 c4 neongreenleaves
wooooooow. ^^ I just love how you made Tom faint. And that part where you had Sirius/Severus/Lestrange... A-Mazing! GOD! I would have never thought of Fred/George/Hermione being good at all but this just does it! :)
wooooooow. ^^ I just love how you made Tom faint. And that part where you had Sirius/Severus/Lestrange... A-Mazing! GOD! I would have never thought of Fred/George/Hermione being good at all but this just does it! :)
9/25/2011 c2 neongreenleaves
I was giggling throughout this whole chapter! Woop Woop! Go Neville! To the dark side we go!
I was giggling throughout this whole chapter! Woop Woop! Go Neville! To the dark side we go!
9/25/2011 c1 16neongreenleaves
Okay. SO I'm just gonna say this is an AWESOME story so far. :) Also, I really like Lupin so is it possible if you can make him into a grey dude? And love the lime too! XD
Okay. SO I'm just gonna say this is an AWESOME story so far. :) Also, I really like Lupin so is it possible if you can make him into a grey dude? And love the lime too! XD