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4/23/2012 c1 Little-Miss-X-Gal
That was really good. Surprisingly. I mean, your summary didn't promise much, but it happened to be pretty good. Liked your personification of Toph. Made a lot of sense to me. Just fix the summary, I think. Use a dramatic excerpt or something. Talk about the spiderweb of cracks that shudder through the floor or something. But don't just dismiss your story in the summary. I liked it way more than I expected to. I love your style, too.

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