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2Gillian Deverone
Great story. I love her mom commenting on so many things we've seen over the years. Josh and Donna's wedding? I'd stay home for work for that.
2Gillian DeveroneGreat story. I love her mom commenting on so many things we've seen over the years. Josh and Donna's wedding? I'd stay home for work for that.
9/28/2011 c1 12sassie69
No grammar lessons from me. We all knew what you meant as we were reading it. It ends leaving us thinking there could be more. Nice piece.
12sassie69No grammar lessons from me. We all knew what you meant as we were reading it. It ends leaving us thinking there could be more. Nice piece.
9/27/2011 c1 3alix33
"By that time we were aware of Donna's new job and had encountered quite a number of journalists interested in their complimentary roles." - "complementary roles". "Complimentary roles" means that Donna and Josh would actually give each other compliments, which we all know is not their style, except for president Bartlet's second inauguration ball, when everybody piled into that taxi...
"but we had been well prepared and just referred them back to the White House." - "well-prepared" gets hyphenated.
"seemed to skip bits of the conversation making it difficult to follow - as if they were only vocalising for our sake and could read each other's mind. According to Sam they had done that for years and people had grown used to hearing half conversations," - AW!
"When we had an excited call one February 15th we were little prepared for the ensuing onslaught of journalists. Whole pages of prominent papers were devoted to the forthcoming wedding, especially once they decided it would be practical to hold it in DC and persuaded the White House was the best venue for security as well as to cater for the enormous number of guests. Luckily, we did not have to pay for it." - Yay! A better White House wedding than Ellie Bartlet marrying that dweeb!
3alix33"By that time we were aware of Donna's new job and had encountered quite a number of journalists interested in their complimentary roles." - "complementary roles". "Complimentary roles" means that Donna and Josh would actually give each other compliments, which we all know is not their style, except for president Bartlet's second inauguration ball, when everybody piled into that taxi...
"but we had been well prepared and just referred them back to the White House." - "well-prepared" gets hyphenated.
"seemed to skip bits of the conversation making it difficult to follow - as if they were only vocalising for our sake and could read each other's mind. According to Sam they had done that for years and people had grown used to hearing half conversations," - AW!
"When we had an excited call one February 15th we were little prepared for the ensuing onslaught of journalists. Whole pages of prominent papers were devoted to the forthcoming wedding, especially once they decided it would be practical to hold it in DC and persuaded the White House was the best venue for security as well as to cater for the enormous number of guests. Luckily, we did not have to pay for it." - Yay! A better White House wedding than Ellie Bartlet marrying that dweeb!