for Does It Matter That He's The Devil?6/2/2013 c1 
2anna3311234
Plz!continue this story plz am on the edge of my seat! I love your story soooooo much i wanna knw whats gonna happen next! Plz update soon! I wanna knw what u have instore for the next wonderful chapter!
2anna3311234Plz!continue this story plz am on the edge of my seat! I love your story soooooo much i wanna knw whats gonna happen next! Plz update soon! I wanna knw what u have instore for the next wonderful chapter!
7/27/2012 c4 BookwormI
I'm loving the flashbacks you have with the dynamic between Lucifer and young Sam, and I really want to see where this goes.
Also, janitor Luke coming to Sam's rescue a naming coincidence or not? Actually, don't answer that, I like that picture even if it's not canonically possible.
I'm loving the flashbacks you have with the dynamic between Lucifer and young Sam, and I really want to see where this goes.
Also, janitor Luke coming to Sam's rescue a naming coincidence or not? Actually, don't answer that, I like that picture even if it's not canonically possible.
1/5/2012 c4 5KiloWhisky-NovemberHotel
I love protective lucy :) it's so refreshing how sweet their relationship is in this. Please keep writing. You're doing awesome!
5KiloWhisky-NovemberHotelI love protective lucy :) it's so refreshing how sweet their relationship is in this. Please keep writing. You're doing awesome!
11/4/2011 c3 557TheYmp
I really enjoyed reading this, I loved the idea of Sam and Lucy having a 'history'.
There's a nice air of menace to Lucy - liked how he tries to get Sam to tell him where she is, and won't pressure her 'straight away'.
I like the idea of Sam as a woman and i like how Dean's behavior to her is much the same as male-Sam. Liked the comment about being able to beat up the guy who walked her home.
ScarletBoudica's got some good points, and I do think that you need to proof read a little more (now I've said that I'm bound to make loads of typos myslef ;) ! )
This is definitely the ultimate in "falling for the wrong guy" romances, personally I think it does matter, but I'd love to see how you continue it!
Thanks for sharing!
557TheYmpI really enjoyed reading this, I loved the idea of Sam and Lucy having a 'history'.
There's a nice air of menace to Lucy - liked how he tries to get Sam to tell him where she is, and won't pressure her 'straight away'.
I like the idea of Sam as a woman and i like how Dean's behavior to her is much the same as male-Sam. Liked the comment about being able to beat up the guy who walked her home.
ScarletBoudica's got some good points, and I do think that you need to proof read a little more (now I've said that I'm bound to make loads of typos myslef ;) ! )
This is definitely the ultimate in "falling for the wrong guy" romances, personally I think it does matter, but I'd love to see how you continue it!
Thanks for sharing!
10/1/2011 c3 ScarletBoudica
Ok, i'm goiing to be truthful because you asked for help so...please dont get mad. First, this is a good story idea and its going pretty well, i'vve enjoyed it so far despite a few problems. Second, try adding a bit more 'sam' to the story, it doesnt really feel like him even if he wasa girl. Third, add a bit more detail not much but just a smidge. Fourth, slow down and add a bit more conflict, things are going pretty fast and sam seems to be ok with everything going on besides a few hiccups. And out of curiosity have you considered writting this in third person? But anyway i' m liking how this is going and i'm sorry if this came off as rude but i o ly want to be helpful:)
Ok, i'm goiing to be truthful because you asked for help so...please dont get mad. First, this is a good story idea and its going pretty well, i'vve enjoyed it so far despite a few problems. Second, try adding a bit more 'sam' to the story, it doesnt really feel like him even if he wasa girl. Third, add a bit more detail not much but just a smidge. Fourth, slow down and add a bit more conflict, things are going pretty fast and sam seems to be ok with everything going on besides a few hiccups. And out of curiosity have you considered writting this in third person? But anyway i' m liking how this is going and i'm sorry if this came off as rude but i o ly want to be helpful:)