11/12/2013 c1 38Peace Sign Freak
I think you had an interesting idea for the story. It is true that Riza is capable of thinking of suicide if she felt that she could never live with herself. It was implied when Roy was about to kill Envy in Brotherhood and he went mad and Riza had kept her promise to Roy by shooting him if he ever walked off the path of righteousness, but confessed that she wouldn't live on much longer in the physical world once she killed him. Besides, if she did consider committing suicide once the Ishvalian War was over, she probably wouldn't be in the series for very long or not in it at all except through flashbacks through Roy. But I do appreciate your bold move of writing this story. The only other thing is that it is Fuhrer not Further. Further is like "going further". Further is an action, a motion to go forward. If you ever have trouble remembering how to spell Fuhrer just go to Full Metal Alchemist Wiki, click on the link of Kind Bradley's name and scroll down to his rank in his bio box/ rectangle. Whatever you want to call it. If that won't do just type in Adolf Hitler's name on a web search engine and look for a bio description of him. I'm sure Wikipedia will give you the basic information in the first paragraph or so. Aside from that, you did a good job on writing the story. Keep up the good work.

4/25/2012 c1 3edwardfiend
Really liked this. kind of heavy, but the last line of the story made me smile.

10/12/2011 c1 10Lalalupin
Omg, this was sooo cool! I loved it so much! So sweet, I could see everything happen: it was very convincing! Keep up the great work!

9/29/2011 c1 xXxMimi-ChanxXx
this was a really cute one shot!

i loved how he wrote in the end that he loved her!

awsome job ;D