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6/16/2018 c4 26917brat
I love this so much, it is such an interesting chapter, an interesting story that really only seems to be getting better and better with the more I read of it; please keep it up because I would so love to read more of it.
6/16/2014 c2 32charlietheepic7
please tell my that trinity is the TARDIS b/c Trinity vARDIS
3/21/2014 c1 2grimmich
why does it seem so hard for a lot of fic writers to let harry look like a man? everyone seems to want to make him pretty or girly what is wrong with a man looking like a man?
10/10/2013 c4 domsijohn
cute
10/10/2013 c2 domsijohn
so very good
10/10/2013 c1 domsijohn
so good
7/11/2012 c1 2Lizelda
AWPIC! :333
7/9/2012 c1 Sarcastic Cat Marie
I love cool, sarcastic Harry. It just makes the story more hilarious. Though to be Master of Death it would require self-control. It was just funny how he basically said "Well, I really don't care about the world ending b/c I would live anyway but it would be annoying to be noticed by the demons and angels."
11/20/2011 c1 18Tango Dancer
Sounds interesting! I loved the 'bored' line, it was funny as hell^^! Anyway... keep up the good job!
10/13/2011 c4 Vicki219
Cool story!
10/6/2011 c4 12Rokkis
Nope still Mary-Sue as far as I can see.

Good luck though

Cheers
10/6/2011 c2 Rokkis
Isn't Trinity sort of pointless? From cannon we know that Death made the item for the three brothers and Harry has inherited them. I sort of thought that made him his own boss. Why do you need an additional OC? Feels sort... Mary-Sueish.

I'll just keep reading shall I

Cheers
10/4/2011 c4 3TheLonesomeMonster
cool story, but I think I would like it better if Harry was a little less cold.
10/3/2011 c4 silverkat87
this is an interesting story however trinity just seems to have too much power and can solve all their problems with a single thought.

I think the story would be much better without trinity and believe you should consider starting over without that character. the story needs problems that are not solved so easily within the chapter (e.g chapter 4 has a trap for castiel and bobby is kidnapped and both of these were resolved within a few paragraphs. you should consider showing more about how the rescue occured and maybe planning of the rescue.) making rescues longer is easier when you dont have a mary sue type character clocking everyone till the last second.

I hope you dont find my review too critical but i think some of you ideas are good but there are somethings that dont appeal to many readers (mary sue's and plots going to fast).
10/2/2011 c3 little-bast
Great Chapter...Keep them coming!

I thought they would be heading to Bobby's for the conversation. How will Castiel react to Harry? will know of Harry being a wizard?

I love that they hid the impala.

Looking forward to your next chapter...

Can't wait for the upcoming conversation...

Hoping for an update soon...
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