for A very muggle date1/4/2016 c1 
42luvdragons
You are really good at writing in English and I didn't see anything! The story was amazing too!
42luvdragonsYou are really good at writing in English and I didn't see anything! The story was amazing too!
10/19/2011 c1 12sophiafreak7797
AWESOME and noo mistakes it was so cute and sweet and omg ur from spain i wanna go there so bad wht's it like?
12sophiafreak7797AWESOME and noo mistakes it was so cute and sweet and omg ur from spain i wanna go there so bad wht's it like?
10/2/2011 c1 64Serena Princesita Hale
It´s a very pretty
So a litte mistake. It´s Lily Potter not Lily Evans
64Serena Princesita HaleIt´s a very pretty
So a litte mistake. It´s Lily Potter not Lily Evans