for The Rise of The Raikage1/2 c1 jonahtapper1228
This was an awesome Segway into the raikage! You could expand it into his training to to how he became so powerful, and the carious wars he fights until becoming raikage! I hope you choose to expand on this!
This was an awesome Segway into the raikage! You could expand it into his training to to how he became so powerful, and the carious wars he fights until becoming raikage! I hope you choose to expand on this!
10/3/2022 c1 nimaroma52
Tu historia es increible aunque seria muy triste que terminara aqui aun asi muchas gracias por todo tu esfuerzo en serio
Tu historia es increible aunque seria muy triste que terminara aqui aun asi muchas gracias por todo tu esfuerzo en serio
7/24/2021 c1 KaiEmblem
Hmm interesting filler to complete the story, sadly u didnt describe the reaction of pa, ma,sage toad and other toads after hearing the news from gamabunta. Well in the rainage u already wrote their reaction but a little bit more detail would be a little interesting to read
Hmm interesting filler to complete the story, sadly u didnt describe the reaction of pa, ma,sage toad and other toads after hearing the news from gamabunta. Well in the rainage u already wrote their reaction but a little bit more detail would be a little interesting to read
12/16/2020 c1 Guest
continua las dos historias son muy buenas, seria una lastima que no se termine o por lo menos que digas si no las vas a seguir
continua las dos historias son muy buenas, seria una lastima que no se termine o por lo menos que digas si no las vas a seguir
7/21/2020 c1 Danirodriguez1995
Please continue, the story is very good, do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a fan of this type of stories and the truth is unmatched.
Please continue, the story is very good, do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a fan of this type of stories and the truth is unmatched.
5/10/2020 c1 Bryan
I hope you are still continuing this haha it's been years
I hope you are still continuing this haha it's been years
8/20/2019 c1 Samuel Santillan
bueno este es un buen comienzo espero a saber como mejorara la historia en el futuro despues de todo sabemos que se convertira en el shinobi mas fuerte del mundo
bueno este es un buen comienzo espero a saber como mejorara la historia en el futuro despues de todo sabemos que se convertira en el shinobi mas fuerte del mundo
3/4/2019 c1 
8CCSakuraforever
Esta muy bueno el fics me gusta mucho mas que muestra la historia de naruto despues que fue desterrado mas sus nuevos amigos y sensei mas que paso en su gran viaje de convertirse en el rukodaime raikage
8CCSakuraforeverEsta muy bueno el fics me gusta mucho mas que muestra la historia de naruto despues que fue desterrado mas sus nuevos amigos y sensei mas que paso en su gran viaje de convertirse en el rukodaime raikage
8/5/2018 c1 Guest
Where is the another cap Men i can not see it, ah!, i am from Colombia and i love your story the raikage is awesome nice work i will wait your next work
Where is the another cap Men i can not see it, ah!, i am from Colombia and i love your story the raikage is awesome nice work i will wait your next work
6/19/2017 c1 7YgoFoxFire
Update update update update update update update update pls update this fic pls it has been 3 years since you last updated this fic.
7YgoFoxFireUpdate update update update update update update update pls update this fic pls it has been 3 years since you last updated this fic.