for I can take the weight
1311/14/2011 c1 Appalled
Sorry what age are you? Not only can you not get the names of the characters correct - which is unforgivable, but your English is appalling. Now that may be understandable if English isn't your first language, but you shouldn't post an English story with such a kindergarten level of grammar and sentence structure. Please get an English speaking and writing beta next time or stick to your native tongue. It's quality like this that drags Fanfiction and this site down.
Sorry what age are you? Not only can you not get the names of the characters correct - which is unforgivable, but your English is appalling. Now that may be understandable if English isn't your first language, but you shouldn't post an English story with such a kindergarten level of grammar and sentence structure. Please get an English speaking and writing beta next time or stick to your native tongue. It's quality like this that drags Fanfiction and this site down.