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3/11/2012 c9 17AppleCider1412
this is an awsome story! it's so disapointing it's updated slowly, the chapters are shorter than most but not bad, and XDDD hakuba didn't show up instead of aoko but aoko was a nice touch and i have a feeling hakuba will show up the next day to ask why kaito skipped school
3/11/2012 c9 3reader238
I was hoping that you would have Kaito somehow leave a note at the museum saying something along the lines of "due to certain memebers of a yakuza taking advantage of my show to kidnap my favorite tantei-san yada yada yada show being postponed" kaito never disapoints his fans and it would also put the B.O. in the light making Gin's failure the more sweet

oh well hope you come up with a good name for him keep up the good work
3/10/2012 c8 CrimsonSai
oh no... not a cliffhanger :(

I want to know what will happen next... great story :)
3/10/2012 c4 CrimsonSai
I believe they do have mail box... it's near the stairs leading to Detective Agency (it's shown in episode "Deduction that was too good" and probably other but mail box was important at the end of this episode)
3/10/2012 c3 CrimsonSai
I can be wrong but isn't Sonoko's last name Suzuki?

I was laughing hard at 'I'm cute and innocent little boy' simle thing :)
3/10/2012 c1 CrimsonSai
Very interesting concept :)

I just started reading this story and I'm already dying to know what will happen next...

by the way it's me Kyuubi-DemonFox form DeviantART :)
1/18/2012 c8 Eternal Silver
Looking forwards to the next.
1/18/2012 c7 Eternal Silver
'Eek!' Poor Conan. Got to hurt. Thankfully KID is there, wondered what going through his head while that's happen.
1/18/2012 c6 Eternal Silver
Nice. Going on to the next now.
1/18/2012 c5 Eternal Silver
Love KID's POV. Conan's tensed? Not surprised. But the fact that KID picked up on that others may as well.
1/18/2012 c4 Eternal Silver
Nice one.
1/18/2012 c3 MOVED ON - FIND ME ELSE WHERE
"Im just worried about what might happen if a man who already does stupid things will do when he's drunk." I laughed at this.

The rest was very good, nice set up for the next chapter, kept me wanting to read more. And I will, after lunch. I am going forward to reading the next chapter.
1/18/2012 c2 MOVED ON - FIND ME ELSE WHERE
Love how you have everyone around Gin afraid to go leave him. Love ever more how you Gin fearful of 'That Person'. Conan's and Haibara's senses are on the mark there, yes, not good at all. lol
1/18/2012 c1 MOVED ON - FIND ME ELSE WHERE
And now Gin is aware of Conan... Oh dear.
12/14/2011 c8 reader238
very good story and yes you are evil please update soon i am curious as to how ran will take the news of conan missing
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