for The Liefs of the Forest3/23/2016 c2 Deltora Forever
Wahhh pleaseeee updateeee I lalalalaloveeee it please please pleaseee! Thank youi
Wahhh pleaseeee updateeee I lalalalaloveeee it please please pleaseee! Thank youi
11/17/2013 c1 Abigale
OMG! Are you a VK fan as well? I am. Interesting and a cliff hanger? Really? Aaaahhh!
OMG! Are you a VK fan as well? I am. Interesting and a cliff hanger? Really? Aaaahhh!
9/16/2012 c2 Guest
super interesting!
super interesting!
8/2/2012 c2 2lazy2signin
your a really good writer so dont say u suck its like ur fidhin for complements now tht sucks! Just one thing whyde u make leif act like tht dude from full metal alchamist whos name surpasses me at the momment he wasnt tht sensative about his hight!
Ps i rembered his name it was edward! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAAAAAAY!
your a really good writer so dont say u suck its like ur fidhin for complements now tht sucks! Just one thing whyde u make leif act like tht dude from full metal alchamist whos name surpasses me at the momment he wasnt tht sensative about his hight!
Ps i rembered his name it was edward! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAAAAAAY!
7/29/2012 c2 Lasmineluvr99
I like it. I think I understand what's going on. I hope you continue. The title was absolute brilliance by the way!
I like it. I think I understand what's going on. I hope you continue. The title was absolute brilliance by the way!
7/25/2012 c2 MScull
WRITE NEXT CHAPTER!
WRITE NEXT CHAPTER!
7/24/2012 c2 jasmine
i love it the bit with jasmine says you look like a puppy that just got a treat i carck up laughing please if you dont mind another chapter
i love it the bit with jasmine says you look like a puppy that just got a treat i carck up laughing please if you dont mind another chapter
7/22/2012 c2 Blessed Yet Cursed
Don't call your story crap. Crap goes in the toilet... Thus story is on the Internet... :)
It's a very good story and I expect a lot of good things in it:)
Keep up the work:3
Love ya;)
-Blessed yet cursed
Don't call your story crap. Crap goes in the toilet... Thus story is on the Internet... :)
It's a very good story and I expect a lot of good things in it:)
Keep up the work:3
Love ya;)
-Blessed yet cursed
7/21/2012 c2 dkfhskart
okay...im confused
okay...im confused
7/19/2012 c1 Alyssa
I thought there was more!:(
I thought there was more!:(
4/23/2012 c1 awesomest one
EVIL i really what 2 know what happens please add another chapter
or else just kidding but seriously PLEASE i am begging you :)
EVIL i really what 2 know what happens please add another chapter
or else just kidding but seriously PLEASE i am begging you :)
10/19/2011 c1 
1AnimeWitchPrincess
this is good! wow!
just make sure u dont use chat words in the summary.
maybe be a little more descriptive? idk, this is great though! be sure to publish the next chapter soon!
1AnimeWitchPrincessthis is good! wow!
just make sure u dont use chat words in the summary.
maybe be a little more descriptive? idk, this is great though! be sure to publish the next chapter soon!
10/19/2011 c1 6ShanaSakuraGal
Ohh! I really want to see how this goes! The chapter is so short! Please make it longer! If you have trouble making more scenes to make it longer, you can simply add more details like: surroundings (environment), more feelings a certain character feels and etc.
You better post up the next chappie soon! =D
~ShanaSakuraGal
SSGal
6ShanaSakuraGalOhh! I really want to see how this goes! The chapter is so short! Please make it longer! If you have trouble making more scenes to make it longer, you can simply add more details like: surroundings (environment), more feelings a certain character feels and etc.
You better post up the next chappie soon! =D
~ShanaSakuraGal
SSGal
10/5/2011 c1 32JustAnotherAuthor-Not
It's good but you have to read the rest of the series. Or else cuz I know were you live soooooo there those books will haunt u and hang over your head till there read so u better have a lot of ur library books fin so u can take out Dun Dun dun dun dunnnnn dunnnnnn dunnnnn Dun dunt dee dunt DELTORA quest
O and for the rec the thing I wanted to tell you really badly was how to put the stones in place on the belt!
32JustAnotherAuthor-NotIt's good but you have to read the rest of the series. Or else cuz I know were you live soooooo there those books will haunt u and hang over your head till there read so u better have a lot of ur library books fin so u can take out Dun Dun dun dun dunnnnn dunnnnnn dunnnnn Dun dunt dee dunt DELTORA quest
O and for the rec the thing I wanted to tell you really badly was how to put the stones in place on the belt!