for Something's Going Down In Old Chicago Town5/19 c5 SamonIllmantrim
This is an awesome story and fucking amazing. Also, that last line made me laugh, gasp, and say 'Oh no, Lash!' out loud, so, nice work!
This is an awesome story and fucking amazing. Also, that last line made me laugh, gasp, and say 'Oh no, Lash!' out loud, so, nice work!
4/14 c4 Guest
I think both Harry and Karrin have enough self control not to just start having sex in a room with a bunch of strangers.
I think both Harry and Karrin have enough self control not to just start having sex in a room with a bunch of strangers.
8/26/2020 c5 arellowyn
Ooh, I know you’re busy with the other story, but if you could, I would love it if you were to cone back to this story. I am wanting to know what happens next.
Ooh, I know you’re busy with the other story, but if you could, I would love it if you were to cone back to this story. I am wanting to know what happens next.
42/22/2016 c5 blanketyblankman
Wizards in the Dresden universe don't use a non-native language to protect their minds from melting. The words used to cat an evocation are essentially a mnemonic device, and if their spell was in their native language, they run the risk of casting a spell on accident.
Wizards in the Dresden universe don't use a non-native language to protect their minds from melting. The words used to cat an evocation are essentially a mnemonic device, and if their spell was in their native language, they run the risk of casting a spell on accident.
12/31/2015 c5 Iamdeath33
HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT JESUS FUCING CHRIST FUCK ME WOW HOLY SHIT
Sorry, just needed to get that out of my system. Sorry if I offended anyone.
That was so cool! The Doctor and Co.'s description under Soulgaze was sooo cool, and the fight scene was cool to!
I'm really glad that you didn't kill off Murph, 'cuz she's like one of my favorite characters besides Jack and Amy. And the healing thing was awesome too. Keep up the great work!
-Meggls
HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT JESUS FUCING CHRIST FUCK ME WOW HOLY SHIT
Sorry, just needed to get that out of my system. Sorry if I offended anyone.
That was so cool! The Doctor and Co.'s description under Soulgaze was sooo cool, and the fight scene was cool to!
I'm really glad that you didn't kill off Murph, 'cuz she's like one of my favorite characters besides Jack and Amy. And the healing thing was awesome too. Keep up the great work!
-Meggls
11/16/2015 c2 Rman916
In order to apply a vocal capital to something say the rest in a rhythm, then break the pattern with the capitalized word, while applying a slight focus on that word.
In order to apply a vocal capital to something say the rest in a rhythm, then break the pattern with the capitalized word, while applying a slight focus on that word.
5/19/2015 c4 superwhofilesjackson
So... the doctor and team asks harry and team questions, to which they actually give honest to god answers. And in return they don't even ask any question!? And the soul gaze takes at least a few seconds to start. So even if Rory Did look into dresden's eyes, Harry would have looked away knowing what would happen. And even if the soul gaze DID happen, then I doubt that Rory would actually Hug harry. And so What if thomas took harry to Murphy's (and of course jack and thomas and bob had nothing better to do then make fun of harry) . Harry and Murphy have known each other for more than a decade, and have had feelings for each other for a few years, so it shouldn't be very embarrassing for them to be in the same ROOM. And I know for a fact that Murphy would definitely NOT kiss dresden in public, while some strangers were watching, and then hook up! while harry was right in the middle of the case! And of course they all would trust each the moment they met, and share their very personal feeling and talk about things that they hadn't even told their friends!
But overall I liked the story and the plot is pretty good, according to me.
So... the doctor and team asks harry and team questions, to which they actually give honest to god answers. And in return they don't even ask any question!? And the soul gaze takes at least a few seconds to start. So even if Rory Did look into dresden's eyes, Harry would have looked away knowing what would happen. And even if the soul gaze DID happen, then I doubt that Rory would actually Hug harry. And so What if thomas took harry to Murphy's (and of course jack and thomas and bob had nothing better to do then make fun of harry) . Harry and Murphy have known each other for more than a decade, and have had feelings for each other for a few years, so it shouldn't be very embarrassing for them to be in the same ROOM. And I know for a fact that Murphy would definitely NOT kiss dresden in public, while some strangers were watching, and then hook up! while harry was right in the middle of the case! And of course they all would trust each the moment they met, and share their very personal feeling and talk about things that they hadn't even told their friends!
But overall I liked the story and the plot is pretty good, according to me.