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3/18/2012 c8 6Ka-tay's mind
Yes, red wine tastes horrible. D; Tried it, didn't like it.
2/4/2012 c8 RaeyaK
AWESOME job. could work on a little fighting scence though. ;D GO GO CHAPTER 9!
1/31/2012 c7 Ka-tay's mind
For song lyrics, you could use the italic writting. =) UPDATE SOON!
1/31/2012 c6 Ka-tay's mind
And wa-lah, you now have more reviews than me. =P good job! =D
1/31/2012 c5 Ka-tay's mind
quit writing the "newbie writer" thing at the bottom. you KNOW you're not. ;D
1/31/2012 c4 Ka-tay's mind
Cherly scares me. 'nuff said.
1/31/2012 c3 Ka-tay's mind
Sorry about my late reviews. =P I haven't been on my acc for so long. heheee.
1/29/2012 c3 A Nobidy
Hey just read your second chapter but hiw can a nightwalker be lvl 165? Sorr if you awnsered during a later chapter =3
1/26/2012 c7 Luigi4160
Definitely one of the best MS fan fic I've read. Looking forward to future updates.
1/14/2012 c1 User No Longer Available
Just thought i'd point out: you'd probably get a lot more readers if you changed the rating to T. As long as the violence isn't too gruesome and bloody, as well as the suggested 'sexual content' is carefully worded and does not describe in graphic detail, then you shouldn't have to put an M rating. The default setting for the front page is K - T, and most people don't change the setting to include all ratings. Thus, a lot of potential readers simply don't see your story.
10/27/2011 c2 lol i spam review
add more detail describe everything that isnt in common day life.
10/26/2011 c2 Ka-tay's mind
YEAH! I can teleport people away if they annoy me! ;D

Nicely done. =)
10/10/2011 c1 Ka-tay's mind
HEYHEYHRY! Awesome story!

Told'ya I get 1st review! Now. go . and. review. mine. =)

Do you play a character in here or what? =0

Sweet job, for a newbie. ;D

Can't wait for the next update!

-RaeyaK
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