3/14/2012 c1 9intoxicatedasphyxiation
Quite a lovely one-shot. I like the bit where they actually erased his memories; that's an interesting concept I haven't seen before.
Quite a lovely one-shot. I like the bit where they actually erased his memories; that's an interesting concept I haven't seen before.
1/9/2012 c1 mabidiso
Ridiculously sweet and touching, sad and ominous. Very gifted choices of detail and character voices and movement. Kakashi was barely there, and yet he was felt so clearly, as was Naruto's attacker. Loved little Naruto running his little legs off to warn the Hokage.
Ridiculously sweet and touching, sad and ominous. Very gifted choices of detail and character voices and movement. Kakashi was barely there, and yet he was felt so clearly, as was Naruto's attacker. Loved little Naruto running his little legs off to warn the Hokage.
11/25/2011 c1 25MelancholyMadness
Yay for ANBU Kashi being badass in the shadows. Poor Naruto. He doesn't deserve that. Good use of the word Sandaime. It was very clever!
-Ash
Yay for ANBU Kashi being badass in the shadows. Poor Naruto. He doesn't deserve that. Good use of the word Sandaime. It was very clever!
-Ash
11/15/2011 c1 1Stahchild
Aw *sob* so sad. Reading this makes me miss the Sandaime even more now. I can so believe that this happened in canon :) well done.
Aw *sob* so sad. Reading this makes me miss the Sandaime even more now. I can so believe that this happened in canon :) well done.
10/9/2011 c1 16Tora-Hime-Melody
*box of tissues in hand*
So good!
Keep up the good work!
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*box of tissues in hand*
So good!
Keep up the good work!
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