for The Heir6/23/2023 c6 Cindy Reilly
Yes, please I think that Neville should become a fixed character in this story, I think that he would be a great addition to Harry's group of friends.
Yes, please I think that Neville should become a fixed character in this story, I think that he would be a great addition to Harry's group of friends.
5/12/2023 c4 Puff
It was good while it lasted but I had to be sure before I invested and YEP Harry is the bottom? I’m gonna cut out.. I’m not a b!Harry fan but keep up the great work tho!
It was good while it lasted but I had to be sure before I invested and YEP Harry is the bottom? I’m gonna cut out.. I’m not a b!Harry fan but keep up the great work tho!
4/15/2022 c1 Apollos the Destroyer
Honestly haven’t read it yet, I think, but I am totally looking forward to what seems to be a drarry fic, one of my favorite pairings in all honesty.
Honestly haven’t read it yet, I think, but I am totally looking forward to what seems to be a drarry fic, one of my favorite pairings in all honesty.
10/31/2021 c1 rvg0318
burn the guest who said lgbt pairing is not love.. are you stupid or are you stupid? anyway, reading this fic for the nth time.
burn the guest who said lgbt pairing is not love.. are you stupid or are you stupid? anyway, reading this fic for the nth time.
8/4/2021 c18 Guest
I hate, absolutely hate, loathe slash, gay, lesbian stories. In real life, "live and let live" is very easy to maintain and not mind or dive nose in others business. But in stories it seems, this unnatural, weird, kind of love is forced down the throats. This story is so good but no instead of finding a good girl pair opposite Harry, a boy x boy pair is shoved down our throats. It's not love and it's certainly not romantic in any sense.
I hate, absolutely hate, loathe slash, gay, lesbian stories. In real life, "live and let live" is very easy to maintain and not mind or dive nose in others business. But in stories it seems, this unnatural, weird, kind of love is forced down the throats. This story is so good but no instead of finding a good girl pair opposite Harry, a boy x boy pair is shoved down our throats. It's not love and it's certainly not romantic in any sense.
6/15/2021 c8 Ethan Rhodes
\Severus turned from the bathroom entrance to face Lockhart and eyed the man with loathing and disgust. During his Death Eater days Severus had encountered all forms of vial*** and cruel people but there were none that disgusted/
*** I noticed this a few times but the spelling is "vile"
Idk if its been caught b4 but thought i would inform you author
\Severus turned from the bathroom entrance to face Lockhart and eyed the man with loathing and disgust. During his Death Eater days Severus had encountered all forms of vial*** and cruel people but there were none that disgusted/
*** I noticed this a few times but the spelling is "vile"
Idk if its been caught b4 but thought i would inform you author
6/15/2021 c5 Ethan Rhodes
\"Oh my!" Jane Granger said in surprise as she watched the owl fly in and perch on the back of Hermione's chair. "Oh shoo! Go on shoo!" The owl just stared at Jane with large and intelligent golden eyes./
I am picturing hedwig with a deadpan expression that says 'are you for real right now?' Lol
\"Oh my!" Jane Granger said in surprise as she watched the owl fly in and perch on the back of Hermione's chair. "Oh shoo! Go on shoo!" The owl just stared at Jane with large and intelligent golden eyes./
I am picturing hedwig with a deadpan expression that says 'are you for real right now?' Lol
6/15/2021 c3 Ethan Rhodes
\Trying to control his temper Dumbledore made his way over to the table and sat down. His plans would work. They were clever and everything was in place. The boy would soon be looking to him for answers and help. And that was when the boy would be his./
This dumbledore sounds like this to me: "my plans are good plans and they will work and be the goodest plans cause mommy says i am a planning boy and the bestest at making them * smiley face *"
Fukin love it
\Trying to control his temper Dumbledore made his way over to the table and sat down. His plans would work. They were clever and everything was in place. The boy would soon be looking to him for answers and help. And that was when the boy would be his./
This dumbledore sounds like this to me: "my plans are good plans and they will work and be the goodest plans cause mommy says i am a planning boy and the bestest at making them * smiley face *"
Fukin love it
9/4/2020 c1 Guest
Su
Su
7/26/2020 c22 Guest
I don't like that Harry is the bottom.
I don't like that Harry is the bottom.
4/20/2020 c10 
1brittd3667
I'm loving this story so far but if this exploding Sugar Honey Ice Tea is because of Dobby he need a effing whooping. Don't get me wrong I love Dobby but this is to much.
1brittd3667I'm loving this story so far but if this exploding Sugar Honey Ice Tea is because of Dobby he need a effing whooping. Don't get me wrong I love Dobby but this is to much.
4/4/2020 c26 35sevvyboy1fangirl
This was good, though I'm not gonna lie, the tone of this story changed in the middle, and got kind of weird, but I was too far in to stop reading at that point.
35sevvyboy1fangirlThis was good, though I'm not gonna lie, the tone of this story changed in the middle, and got kind of weird, but I was too far in to stop reading at that point.
9/27/2019 c25 bumblebee
this story makes no sense.
bye
this story makes no sense.
bye