for The Heir12/6/2012 c25 schnookums
Fantastic fic! I really have enjoye it so far. I just hope there's a happy ending in sight for the family. I'm curious where Draco's mom is and what her thoughts are on the babies.
Fantastic fic! I really have enjoye it so far. I just hope there's a happy ending in sight for the family. I'm curious where Draco's mom is and what her thoughts are on the babies.
12/6/2012 c25 emice
Holy shit, this chapter was simply fantastic! The ritual? Harry used was amazing, you made it perfectly. I loved the descriptions. Also, I presume Aiden came from the future of which the prophecy Luna mentioned. Things are starting to get really ugly right now and I can't wait! I hope you will update soon!
Holy shit, this chapter was simply fantastic! The ritual? Harry used was amazing, you made it perfectly. I loved the descriptions. Also, I presume Aiden came from the future of which the prophecy Luna mentioned. Things are starting to get really ugly right now and I can't wait! I hope you will update soon!
12/6/2012 c24 emice
To be honest, I'm surprised at least the possibility of marriage never came up on this. Being Harry's husband, I think Draco would have complete control of the wards as well. Or he could have if Harry permitted it. It could have been a way easier way out. I don't see how both of them would mind since they already had children on their way.
To be honest, I'm surprised at least the possibility of marriage never came up on this. Being Harry's husband, I think Draco would have complete control of the wards as well. Or he could have if Harry permitted it. It could have been a way easier way out. I don't see how both of them would mind since they already had children on their way.
12/6/2012 c18 emice
OMG Draco and Harry's scene was really sweet. And, as I'm sure people probably complained about being too soon or their being too young, I must say I think it fits completely. They both had already come to terms about their feelings, they both know each other quite well and I don't think it's too soon for a little bit of experimenting. If they had had sex to the dot I would have thought it was a bit too much, but this was perfect.
OMG Draco and Harry's scene was really sweet. And, as I'm sure people probably complained about being too soon or their being too young, I must say I think it fits completely. They both had already come to terms about their feelings, they both know each other quite well and I don't think it's too soon for a little bit of experimenting. If they had had sex to the dot I would have thought it was a bit too much, but this was perfect.
12/6/2012 c13 emice
I'm in love with your story. There's so many things I tend to search in fics and so much uniqueness as well. Great job, seriously! I particularly love how Harry is a slytherin and the plot of being the fouders' heir is amazing. I've never seen a fiction which he is the heir of all the four of them.
You said it was a weird point to finish this part. I think the only weird thing about is, he hasn't finished his second year yet. Aside that, it's a good stop. I can't wait to see the romance blossoming and how different Hogwarts will be with a new head in charge.
I'm in love with your story. There's so many things I tend to search in fics and so much uniqueness as well. Great job, seriously! I particularly love how Harry is a slytherin and the plot of being the fouders' heir is amazing. I've never seen a fiction which he is the heir of all the four of them.
You said it was a weird point to finish this part. I think the only weird thing about is, he hasn't finished his second year yet. Aside that, it's a good stop. I can't wait to see the romance blossoming and how different Hogwarts will be with a new head in charge.
12/5/2012 c25 
3RauthrMystic
Love your story! In terms of mpreg, my favorite way of dilineation between parents is bearer and sire.. regardless, great story! Keep writing!
3RauthrMysticLove your story! In terms of mpreg, my favorite way of dilineation between parents is bearer and sire.. regardless, great story! Keep writing!
12/5/2012 c25 SkylerKnight
I cried when I read the part with Aiden... The way you wrote it was brilliant. I felt it in my hear.
I cried when I read the part with Aiden... The way you wrote it was brilliant. I felt it in my hear.
12/5/2012 c4 emice
I forgot to say it before, but how come Harry didn't ask the founders ghosts who his grandparents are? It seemed to me the first thing he would ask. I doubt he would go straight to them and run into their arms or something. But for a kid without any family seems to me a pretty obvious question.
I forgot to say it before, but how come Harry didn't ask the founders ghosts who his grandparents are? It seemed to me the first thing he would ask. I doubt he would go straight to them and run into their arms or something. But for a kid without any family seems to me a pretty obvious question.
12/4/2012 c25 MAFITA
Loved the chapter! I really really hope that Harry will be able to stop that horrible future from happening, including stopping the death of Aiden... I also hope that neither he nor any of the others die during the war... It would be awful... Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter to be up! (though the wait was worth it in this case) Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Loved the chapter! I really really hope that Harry will be able to stop that horrible future from happening, including stopping the death of Aiden... I also hope that neither he nor any of the others die during the war... It would be awful... Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter to be up! (though the wait was worth it in this case) Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
11/27/2012 c24 IAN BURKE
ABSOLUTELY EENTHRALLING HURRY UP SORRY GREED GETS THE BETTER OF ONE
ABSOLUTELY EENTHRALLING HURRY UP SORRY GREED GETS THE BETTER OF ONE
11/29/2012 c8 Vahinepapaya
I've reached one third of this story and I thought that I really should drop a comment because this fanfic definitely deserves more reviews. A good Dumbledore bashing, a smart and independent Harry, compassionate Slytherins, the promise of slash, and I just go YAY. Also the narration is a real pleasure with all the twists. A definite Fav, thank you for sharing!
I've reached one third of this story and I thought that I really should drop a comment because this fanfic definitely deserves more reviews. A good Dumbledore bashing, a smart and independent Harry, compassionate Slytherins, the promise of slash, and I just go YAY. Also the narration is a real pleasure with all the twists. A definite Fav, thank you for sharing!