2/23/2021 c1 Guest
Really cute
Really cute
9/19/2018 c1 Guest
This was so cute!I loved it
This was so cute!I loved it
7/9/2012 c1 ThePsychoticfun1
But I don't HAVE chocolate bars! *cries* I'm sorry I couldn't give you a chocolate bar!*bawls* -some random person comforts her- *looks at the person* ...I don't want pity, dork -.- *walks away leaving him there, sadly we shall never know his name*
This was a really good short story. I look forward to more! ..MORE!
Sorry I don't have an account.
But I don't HAVE chocolate bars! *cries* I'm sorry I couldn't give you a chocolate bar!*bawls* -some random person comforts her- *looks at the person* ...I don't want pity, dork -.- *walks away leaving him there, sadly we shall never know his name*
This was a really good short story. I look forward to more! ..MORE!
Sorry I don't have an account.
11/24/2011 c1 5AdelaideChrome
OMG! I love it! It's super sweet and it got sweeter when I remembered seeing Alina-chan's drawing on deviant art about a month ago. This story definitely suits that drawing
Great job! :)
OMG! I love it! It's super sweet and it got sweeter when I remembered seeing Alina-chan's drawing on deviant art about a month ago. This story definitely suits that drawing
Great job! :)
10/15/2011 c1 93Mrs. HopeEstheim
I was just going to favorite this, but...your plea for chocolate bars got me. xD
I love Alina-chan's work on DeviantART, and I loved this story. So much. It was the perfect amount of suspenseful and cute and fluffy and...yeah. I'll stop embarrassing myself, shall I?
Great job! Keep it up :)
I was just going to favorite this, but...your plea for chocolate bars got me. xD
I love Alina-chan's work on DeviantART, and I loved this story. So much. It was the perfect amount of suspenseful and cute and fluffy and...yeah. I'll stop embarrassing myself, shall I?
Great job! Keep it up :)
10/12/2011 c1 13Senbei x Cup Ramen
Awww! Short yet sweet!
I loved it how Natsu decided to comfort her...depsite looking/being half-dead XD
Gahhh! I wish it were longer :P
Will be looking forward to your future works! :D
Awww! Short yet sweet!
I loved it how Natsu decided to comfort her...depsite looking/being half-dead XD
Gahhh! I wish it were longer :P
Will be looking forward to your future works! :D