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7/28/2012 c1 pensguin
Wow, I think you portrayed Mukuro's character very well. And, I like that little point of loyalty in the story with Chrome. Nice job.
3/21/2012 c1 TunaForDesert
err...

*speechless*

honestly? that was just weird...
1/27/2012 c1 1ShiroiSuna
I just finished reviewing "Forcing You" and I was reading the reviews for chapter four. As such, I decided to take a look at your profile. I love drabbles and Mukuro and Tsuna is a favorite pairing of mine, so I decided to review this, too!

My grammar is falsifiable as always.

Delete the comma after "him". Delete the comma after "shudder".

Delete the comma after "on".

Delete the comma after "corner". Correct "stiff" to "stiffen".

Add a comma after "rough".

Replace the comma after "job" with a semicolon.

Delete the comma after "Nagi". Correct "sorts" to "sort".

This is such a breathtaking story! You allude to Chrome's loyalty to Mukuro over Tsuna often overlooked by other authors. Mukuro's sadism in desecrating Tsuna's body and mind is so piercingly clear. You note how he takes over his victim's identity so well. The parallelism of Mukuro possessing and raping Tsuna's body with his hacking into Tsuna's mind is truly amazing. The smut is purposeful, a rarity I thought had not existed. I am so glad to have found an author like you!

Kindly,

Shizuka Sato
11/21/2011 c1 one hell of an otaku
it is pretty good but personally i think that this should be rated under M because it is'int exactly "clean" just some food for thought

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