
1/23 c1 ladysapphire211268
WOW! Very brutal and imaginative. The ending was a shock. Thank you for sharing
WOW! Very brutal and imaginative. The ending was a shock. Thank you for sharing
9/2/2022 c1
28Sarai Masen
Wow! I was kinda hoping she was in on the killing and I'm so glad I was right. They get off on that, definitely, and they're perfect for each other.
Loved it!

Wow! I was kinda hoping she was in on the killing and I'm so glad I was right. They get off on that, definitely, and they're perfect for each other.
Loved it!
3/21/2022 c1 Hadley Hemingway
Holy shit! Someone recommended this to me when I mentioned your name, so I dove in! A whole new side to Katinki - who knew?! Great contest entry, great little piece of writing. I think I need to check out some of your other words... Thanks so much for sharing!
Holy shit! Someone recommended this to me when I mentioned your name, so I dove in! A whole new side to Katinki - who knew?! Great contest entry, great little piece of writing. I think I need to check out some of your other words... Thanks so much for sharing!
10/7/2019 c1 Tan
Yep, I clocked it. I knew they were together.
Yep, I clocked it. I knew they were together.
7/30/2017 c1 MysterySan
It was so shocking! I still can't believe Bella was actually acting. Suddenly it makes sense that all those things he was saying about her were actually true. They are made for each other ( I don't mean in that in the romantic way).
It was so shocking! I still can't believe Bella was actually acting. Suddenly it makes sense that all those things he was saying about her were actually true. They are made for each other ( I don't mean in that in the romantic way).
6/30/2017 c1
2Liz 1974
U know theres a song that would go with this story friend me on fb
Liz Emmett Meyer & I will message u it :)

U know theres a song that would go with this story friend me on fb
Liz Emmett Meyer & I will message u it :)
6/29/2017 c1
1Azlady2003
Wow...so is bellas line about best one yet referring to the kill or the sex/rape

Wow...so is bellas line about best one yet referring to the kill or the sex/rape