for Disarm10/20/2011 c1 Darcyfan14
You are have all terrified with this story so wicked,crazy,sad,but so good at the same time.
You are have all terrified with this story so wicked,crazy,sad,but so good at the same time.
10/20/2011 c1 mara7c
Absolutely amazing! Halfway through the story I hoped it would have that same type of ending. Psycho Edward makes me smile!
Absolutely amazing! Halfway through the story I hoped it would have that same type of ending. Psycho Edward makes me smile!
10/20/2011 c1 
1barbie23
holy fuck?
that was scary... it reminded me a little bit of dexter...
that line at the end... did she mean sex or death?
(Freud woulf be delighted with that last line;)
1barbie23holy fuck?
that was scary... it reminded me a little bit of dexter...
that line at the end... did she mean sex or death?
(Freud woulf be delighted with that last line;)
10/19/2011 c1 28texasbella
um...WOW...this is disturbingly well written. you want to look away, but you can't...
this one may haunt me for a while...and that's not necessarily a bad thing.
28texasbellaum...WOW...this is disturbingly well written. you want to look away, but you can't...
this one may haunt me for a while...and that's not necessarily a bad thing.
10/18/2011 c1 1greeklove
Loved the story! Halfway through you get the feeling from Edward that they play this game together with Bella...
1greekloveLoved the story! Halfway through you get the feeling from Edward that they play this game together with Bella...
10/18/2011 c1 1AnjieNet
So totally WRONG but I loved every minute of it. So dark and totally disturbing. Jake showed his true colors in picking himself to live over his girl, not that it did him a bit of good. Was hoping she was in on the plot when the "rape" began.
1AnjieNetSo totally WRONG but I loved every minute of it. So dark and totally disturbing. Jake showed his true colors in picking himself to live over his girl, not that it did him a bit of good. Was hoping she was in on the plot when the "rape" began.
10/18/2011 c1 Britt01
Ummmm...damn! Yeah, good thing you insisted the reader continue to the end! Extremely disturbing, but well written.
Ummmm...damn! Yeah, good thing you insisted the reader continue to the end! Extremely disturbing, but well written.
10/18/2011 c1 4nofeartina
I can't believe how much I loved this story. It's gruesome and painful, but the end makes up for it...
4nofeartinaI can't believe how much I loved this story. It's gruesome and painful, but the end makes up for it...
10/17/2011 c1 1littlelizruth
OMG! seriously psychopath(s)! that was so not what i was expecting! damn! good ending!
1littlelizruthOMG! seriously psychopath(s)! that was so not what i was expecting! damn! good ending!
10/17/2011 c1 13Lovelybrutal
Oh my goodness. This raised the pushing-of-limits to an art form. You had my stomach turning and my brain spinning and i wondered if this was going to be something i regretted reading but, no, i really loved it. A very dark, descriptive ride with a madman. i loved the anger in him, the tension. And the twist ... Wow. Absolutely fantastic job. Thank you for sharing it and best of luck in the contest!
13LovelybrutalOh my goodness. This raised the pushing-of-limits to an art form. You had my stomach turning and my brain spinning and i wondered if this was going to be something i regretted reading but, no, i really loved it. A very dark, descriptive ride with a madman. i loved the anger in him, the tension. And the twist ... Wow. Absolutely fantastic job. Thank you for sharing it and best of luck in the contest!