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10/20/2011 c1 Darcyfan14
You are have all terrified with this story so wicked,crazy,sad,but so good at the same time.
10/20/2011 c1 mara7c
Absolutely amazing! Halfway through the story I hoped it would have that same type of ending. Psycho Edward makes me smile!
10/20/2011 c1 1barbie23
holy fuck?

that was scary... it reminded me a little bit of dexter...

that line at the end... did she mean sex or death?

(Freud woulf be delighted with that last line;)
10/19/2011 c1 Lurecyka
Wow...that was something. Your an incredible writer ! Bravo :)
10/19/2011 c1 sncmom are twisted. so freaking twisted.
10/19/2011 c1 BloodyRedRoses22
Love it! Please UD soon! XXD
10/19/2011 c1 28texasbella
um...WOW...this is disturbingly well written. you want to look away, but you can't...

this one may haunt me for a while...and that's not necessarily a bad thing.
10/18/2011 c1 1greeklove
Loved the story! Halfway through you get the feeling from Edward that they play this game together with Bella...
10/18/2011 c1 punkrose86
So twisted! I loved it! It was very well written!
10/18/2011 c1 dnCnb
You never disappoint. Brilliant.
10/18/2011 c1 1AnjieNet
So totally WRONG but I loved every minute of it. So dark and totally disturbing. Jake showed his true colors in picking himself to live over his girl, not that it did him a bit of good. Was hoping she was in on the plot when the "rape" began.
10/18/2011 c1 Britt01
Ummmm...damn! Yeah, good thing you insisted the reader continue to the end! Extremely disturbing, but well written.
10/18/2011 c1 4nofeartina
I can't believe how much I loved this story. It's gruesome and painful, but the end makes up for it...
10/17/2011 c1 1littlelizruth
OMG! seriously psychopath(s)! that was so not what i was expecting! damn! good ending!
10/17/2011 c1 13Lovelybrutal
Oh my goodness. This raised the pushing-of-limits to an art form. You had my stomach turning and my brain spinning and i wondered if this was going to be something i regretted reading but, no, i really loved it. A very dark, descriptive ride with a madman. i loved the anger in him, the tension. And the twist ... Wow. Absolutely fantastic job. Thank you for sharing it and best of luck in the contest!
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