for The Wrong Love3/16/2012 c18 
1IShipFabrevans
I loved Sam in this chapter. He had like a thousand faults in the chapter but his little conversation with Quinn in the end was enough to ignore the above.
I have no clear opinion of Quinn in this chapter, she seemed very confused, first she was a weak girl in front of Sam but then in her pov she was the strong and wise Quinn we all know, I'm not complaining! somehow it is understandable that she acted that way in front of him, after all she does not remember what exactly happened between them and now she is having his baby. I just like her more when she is the strong Quinn.
It will be fun to see how they progress with their friendship, the baby and couples while they are in love with each other.
I really liked the whole chapter. I like that Ashley is good, it gets boring when writers invent OCs only for them to be the bad guys or the perfect characters (Sue-Stu) as I say to my OCs are neutral characters that should help carry the story, not the main focus of it. Ashley looks real. Braden, that's another story. I don't hate nor love him. His pills sound strange but I don't think anyone in their right mind is going to risk his career just to get a girl. Maybe he is a madman obsessed with Quinn? that would explain it, even so I have my doubts. For me he is innocent until proven guilty.
I think you should take advantage of your blow of inspiration and continue with the updates. I must be the only one who is interested in seeing the relationship of Sam/Ashley, Quinn/Braden, but I see no risk in this, as you left it clear that Sam and Quinn are endgame here, not that I have any doubt about that. I don't know about you, but when someone tells me 'please update soon!' I get that feeling that I'm a terrible person and I should update sooner my stories. So I'll try here; Please Update Soon!.
1IShipFabrevansI loved Sam in this chapter. He had like a thousand faults in the chapter but his little conversation with Quinn in the end was enough to ignore the above.
I have no clear opinion of Quinn in this chapter, she seemed very confused, first she was a weak girl in front of Sam but then in her pov she was the strong and wise Quinn we all know, I'm not complaining! somehow it is understandable that she acted that way in front of him, after all she does not remember what exactly happened between them and now she is having his baby. I just like her more when she is the strong Quinn.
It will be fun to see how they progress with their friendship, the baby and couples while they are in love with each other.
I really liked the whole chapter. I like that Ashley is good, it gets boring when writers invent OCs only for them to be the bad guys or the perfect characters (Sue-Stu) as I say to my OCs are neutral characters that should help carry the story, not the main focus of it. Ashley looks real. Braden, that's another story. I don't hate nor love him. His pills sound strange but I don't think anyone in their right mind is going to risk his career just to get a girl. Maybe he is a madman obsessed with Quinn? that would explain it, even so I have my doubts. For me he is innocent until proven guilty.
I think you should take advantage of your blow of inspiration and continue with the updates. I must be the only one who is interested in seeing the relationship of Sam/Ashley, Quinn/Braden, but I see no risk in this, as you left it clear that Sam and Quinn are endgame here, not that I have any doubt about that. I don't know about you, but when someone tells me 'please update soon!' I get that feeling that I'm a terrible person and I should update sooner my stories. So I'll try here; Please Update Soon!.
3/15/2012 c18 1QuamFabrevansshipper4ever
I 3 your stories they are so emotional and nice but I really hate Brandon :/
1QuamFabrevansshipper4everI 3 your stories they are so emotional and nice but I really hate Brandon :/
3/15/2012 c18 QSQS
WHAT THE FUCK!
it was like someone put a knife in my gut, and with every word moved it around!
Whyyy did u have him sleep with someone else, and be so cold to her, pregnant,cryin and he still says she should move on and be happy,, WHAT THE FUCK!
ugghh i just can't, it's just ugh aaaaaaaaaa
WHAT THE FUCK!
it was like someone put a knife in my gut, and with every word moved it around!
Whyyy did u have him sleep with someone else, and be so cold to her, pregnant,cryin and he still says she should move on and be happy,, WHAT THE FUCK!
ugghh i just can't, it's just ugh aaaaaaaaaa
3/15/2012 c18 RJRRAA
LOVED IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH, PLZ PLZ PLZ WRITE SOON!
Braden Michaels is his name but at the end you put Braden Williams just want to make sure they are the same person and just a typo
LOVED IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH, PLZ PLZ PLZ WRITE SOON!
Braden Michaels is his name but at the end you put Braden Williams just want to make sure they are the same person and just a typo
3/15/2012 c18 HorseGirly2
Ohhhhh I loved this chapter! I think that The pills that Braden have Quinn arent pain killers but medicine to stop her remembering! That evil man!
Update soon :)
Ohhhhh I loved this chapter! I think that The pills that Braden have Quinn arent pain killers but medicine to stop her remembering! That evil man!
Update soon :)
3/15/2012 c18 FabrevansOTP
Love it? Hate it? I bloody adore it, absolutely amazing! Ohh, I'm kinda glad that there not together straight away, cuz it means a little more drama. Can't wait for the next chapter :D
Love it? Hate it? I bloody adore it, absolutely amazing! Ohh, I'm kinda glad that there not together straight away, cuz it means a little more drama. Can't wait for the next chapter :D
3/15/2012 c18 Written-in-hearts
This chapter was good, I just hate how it ended! I hate Ashley and I hate Braden. I hope Quinn doesn't go back to him. Ashley should break it off with Sam, or vice versa, either way these relationships need to end. I can't stand Sam and Quinn not being together! Keep writing, please.
This chapter was good, I just hate how it ended! I hate Ashley and I hate Braden. I hope Quinn doesn't go back to him. Ashley should break it off with Sam, or vice versa, either way these relationships need to end. I can't stand Sam and Quinn not being together! Keep writing, please.
3/12/2012 c17 Anonymous
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! I NEED YOU TO UPDATE!
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! I NEED YOU TO UPDATE!
2/16/2012 c17 Fabrevans Is Perfect
I loved it! continue;
I loved it! continue;
2/6/2012 c17 Overgron 3
Yeah i hate Braden and Ashley in good way cause they bring more drama and its cool.Fabrevans should get together soon :) Nice chapter and make more soon
Yeah i hate Braden and Ashley in good way cause they bring more drama and its cool.Fabrevans should get together soon :) Nice chapter and make more soon
2/5/2012 c17 RJRRAA
LOVED IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH, PLZ PLZ PLZ WRITE SOON!
Still think Braden needs to die! Ashley is not that bad yet.
But Ashley can not get pregnant!
LOVED IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH, PLZ PLZ PLZ WRITE SOON!
Still think Braden needs to die! Ashley is not that bad yet.
But Ashley can not get pregnant!
2/5/2012 c17 1IShipFabrevans
The chapter was good, only a few things bother me. At first I wanted a Quinn-Braden relationship to show Sam what a idiot he was, but given that Braden is a ass, I don't want him near Quinn. His character is now useless, he can't give drama with surprise, we all know that he is the bad guy so we expect only bad things from him and wait for Sam or Quinn to take his mask off.
I hope Ashley do not get pregnant, that is only a Puck's thing to get girls pregnant after one time. Besides it will be predictable. Sam Evans just needs to focus on his baby, no matter what Quinn says, he has rights. It would be good to have them taking care of Quinn's pregnancy for a while. No more third parties in the middle or misunderstandings. Again, the chapter was good, only the attitudes of Sam and Quinn bother me more than the OCs. The two are acting like teenagers, when they are 24 years old and expecting a child, a bit of seriousness would be good.
1IShipFabrevansThe chapter was good, only a few things bother me. At first I wanted a Quinn-Braden relationship to show Sam what a idiot he was, but given that Braden is a ass, I don't want him near Quinn. His character is now useless, he can't give drama with surprise, we all know that he is the bad guy so we expect only bad things from him and wait for Sam or Quinn to take his mask off.
I hope Ashley do not get pregnant, that is only a Puck's thing to get girls pregnant after one time. Besides it will be predictable. Sam Evans just needs to focus on his baby, no matter what Quinn says, he has rights. It would be good to have them taking care of Quinn's pregnancy for a while. No more third parties in the middle or misunderstandings. Again, the chapter was good, only the attitudes of Sam and Quinn bother me more than the OCs. The two are acting like teenagers, when they are 24 years old and expecting a child, a bit of seriousness would be good.