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4/3/2012 c28 2ASparkleOfSapphire
God your really going to leave it there ? Talk about a mean cliffhanger :P

More sanubis and I agree with whoever said that the next chapter should have a bit of Jaz's POV, maybe what was going through her head when Carter told her she was walt's true love ? Just a suggestion :D

You use so many :) in your replies to other people's reviews at the beginning ! :D

Good story keep going, it's nearly the end :'(

Update soon :D
4/2/2012 c28 1Riddle Goddess
great story! can't wait 4 ur next update! :D
4/2/2012 c28 Guest
Please update soon. I think you should do a scene where Walt corners Sadie in a private room/time and surprisingly kisses her and tells her that his time is running out. Walt would feel the presence of Anubis and ask Sadie what's up. Anubis has to summon his strength and take over sadie's body for a quick second to tell Walt, and so on.
4/2/2012 c28 Guest
The next chapter should be in Jaz's POV.
4/1/2012 c24 Guest
I think that it should of have been Sadie, not Jaz.
4/1/2012 c28 6NeverEndingImagination1210
Upload soon!
4/1/2012 c28 T
Is it okay if I take this whole story as my own and post it on my FF account? Well, i'm already doing that so... Here's the link to see your story posted on my account. Bye, M! http:/m.fanfiction.net/u/3464567/TastexthexGothyxNerd
4/1/2012 c28 I-LOVE-STORIES1
Great chapter! Loved it so much though it was kinda short, but that doesn't matter. As long as the chapter's good, everything is fine.

Its getting really interesting to. Write again soon!
4/1/2012 c28 sonychic101
this is a good story update soon
3/31/2012 c28 10SpottedPelt of ThunderClan
Good Chappie again March150! I like how everyone tries to tel Jaz the situation calmly and not freak out. I like werer the story is goiign. :D
3/31/2012 c28 7Reality Hits Hard
Okay, so why don't I make you a deal? I review consistently and you update faster? Sounds good, right? Anyways...so...my review. It's quite interesting how you incorporated the love triangle in there. I am curious as to what happens next. I never thought that Jaz and Walt would end up together and I enjoy the twist. But maybe you could twist the twist? You are a talented writer and you should UPDATE more often.

Jennie Spring out.
3/30/2012 c28 ISpyANinjaAndItsMe
Kool chapter! Update sooner! Can't wait to see what happens,

P.s. more sanubis lol
3/30/2012 c28 Weird-Ally-Ilikesuperheroes
I LOVE THIS! LEASE UPDATE SOON! THXS :)

~ally out
3/30/2012 c28 5Idiosia
I really like how you kept Jaz IC, calm and gentle like she always is.

Also, I like the cliff-hanger! Even though they are annoying. This one made me want more. Which, in other words, was very good.

Keep writing!
3/29/2012 c28 Guest
Please update soon. I think you should do a scene where Walt corners Sadie in a private time and surprisingly kisses her and tells her that his time is running out. Walt would feel the presence of anubid and ask Sadie what's up. Anubis has to summon his strength and take over sadies bodies for a quick second to tell Walt. Well that's just a suggestion

other than that your story is so far one of my most favorite
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