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2/5/2020 c9 Guest
why haven't you updated please dooooooo
3/26/2018 c9 Guest
Wow Bella is somewhat of a tease and bitch(sorry but true) in this story and by that I mean bad friend to Jake just dropping him like nothing for 3 days just to try get laid by Edward like nothing. Says she forgets everything when shes with Jake but fails to mention same thing goes for her being with Edward tho far worse because he manipulates her into doing what she doesn't want like not seeing Jake. That bitch Bella need to wake up or Jake call her out on her crap and move on
1/28/2016 c10 2sarahmicaela88
The poor kid is kind of a sap
1/28/2016 c9 sarahmicaela88
Damn this girl at least has some sort of class and self respect and isn't a bitch. I give her props.
1/28/2016 c8 sarahmicaela88
Truth be told why shouldn't he? Bea's always gonna choose Ted over him
1/28/2016 c5 sarahmicaela88
Yeah and that's what she's always counted on. But what if Jake actually did get tired of being played and didn't forgive her?
1/28/2016 c4 sarahmicaela88
It never is
1/28/2016 c3 sarahmicaela88
Oh I'm not sorry that they won't ever be engaged considering that they never should have been 4rm the beginning.
1/27/2016 c10 Guest
Bella has no backbone here. Aggravating.
12/20/2015 c2 renee
Please put Bella and Jacob together, love these stories
12/15/2015 c2 Guest
This is not very good. Hows that for a review. An honest one. But bella is her usual piece of shit self so you got that right. Do we really need yet ANOTHER story were Bella uses Jake and he lets her. Do we really need to know how ugly and rotten Bella is inside? You wrote 10 chapters and the story did not even move. 10 chapters for "the basics" Or 10 chapters that you could not find something to say?
12/15/2015 c9 Guest
Thank you so much for abonding this awful story. No need since its like a million other ones.
12/15/2015 c7 Guest
Why are you making Jake as pathetic as Bella. Nopbopdy would put up with a slap in the face like that...nobody. Bellas using jakes forgivness to treat him like shit makes her a piece of shit., I wonder why girl writers mange to put crap like this together. Maybe its a fantasy to have a living doormatt that forgives you for acting like a subhuman.
12/15/2015 c3 Guest
It ISNT possible to love 2 people actually. But no matter Bella hurts everyone because she is a sick twisted selfish little thing. Love doesnt matter to Bella the very idea of love to bella is ridiculous. She certainly does not love The walking corpse. But she wants to us eddie like she uses jake for her own needs..which always come first and others feelings be damned. Bella needs edward to run away from reality. To avoid having to live life on its own terms. Existence with eddie is a sure thing. No risk, no pain, no choices to make. Bella of course being a coward and a selfish cow without a care for anyone but herself or even the ability to empathize would choose death. Bellas head is so fucked up she is appaled that Jake would try to kiss her she is with Eddie even though she keeps inviting him into her bed.. what a looser How about you kill her off in some horrible death.. Thats a win win for jake
12/15/2015 c3 Guest
Bella using jake as usually. Always nice to see a fresh original story ...
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