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10/4/2015 c9 Guest
Bella takes Jake for granted, doesn't see that Edward is trying to control her. It gets so frustrating that Jake doesn't stand up for himself, maybe give a little "tough love", just to make her see that she can't walk all over him. With that said, I really do like this story.
8/17/2015 c8 3PastOneonta
What will Jacob do? He's really not interested. Does he know where Bella is? Does he suspect that she is fooling around with Edward? Poor Jake. Maybe his friends are right, he should get the message and date other girls. Looking forward to more.
8/17/2015 c5 PastOneonta
Welcome back! I am not certain about Bella just yet, and obviously she's not certain about things either...but she's thinking Jake will always forgive her. Not sure that feels right but reading on...
8/9/2015 c8 Bellasjake7
I like your story. I like to beta read.
8/9/2015 c8 KSave
Bella takes Jake forgiving her and being at her beck and call for granted. I hope you make Jake stronger than the whipped puppy that he seems right now. Maybe ignore Bella when she calls and hang out with another female, give someone else some attention. She how she likes the way it feels being second choice. Can't wait to see what you have coming up
7/21/2013 c7 4snow eopard
Awwwwww
5/30/2013 c7 magi97
pleaseee pleaseee keep going...
and PLEASEEE... im begging u can you punish bella make her suffer of somethin is just i mean poor jake he deserves a break or something to distract him or help him forget bella for at least a while and then maybe bella will realize just how much jake can do without her hehehehe please please is so not fair that she can get away with anything just because jake will "always forgive her" not fair :(
and pleaseee... update soon...
5/29/2013 c7 1Gothic-Angel342
this is way better than the original story
2/18/2013 c4 africanprincess10
Cliff hanger ( Hate em.
2/18/2013 c5 africanprincess10
Bella need's to hurry up and pick Jake. Love the chapter!
2/15/2013 c6 africanprincess
Lol wow can't believe you wrote this it was really good and well thought out good job!
2/12/2013 c6 Anonymous
I'm hook. This story is great and I love it. Please update soon.
12/8/2012 c5 magi97
fuck bella! pleaseee... jakeeee look for someone else im begging you
you deserve better than that thing... it would be soooo awesome if jake at least try to win her by others ways like making her jealous or something who wouldnt want to be with him?
i hope he causes bella some pain hum...
great fic update soon
12/8/2012 c5 Brixon
Update please. Sorry for Jake, but I know he has Bells' heart so we should be good.

Lots of love,
TSL
10/16/2012 c4 Lifemovedforward
nicely progression in this chapter... cliffie too!
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