
8/19/2019 c23 UncleBlackPanther
A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.
A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.
2/10/2019 c3 Guest
All he did was enter the mindscape. Theres no reason for the kyuubis chakra to be covering or taking him over wtf
All he did was enter the mindscape. Theres no reason for the kyuubis chakra to be covering or taking him over wtf
2/10/2019 c2 Guest
So.. he suddenly know a new fighting technique after unlocking the eye. Also out of no where hes licking bad molesting her in front of everyone without thought of them because of the eye?
So.. he suddenly know a new fighting technique after unlocking the eye. Also out of no where hes licking bad molesting her in front of everyone without thought of them because of the eye?
9/20/2018 c2 ionut.cosmin12
Well not bad but also kind of low , i mean doing that in midlle off all students and parents and no 1 says nothing ,there is no point to do that in exams, no diference if they were by themselfs as the others dont exist
Well not bad but also kind of low , i mean doing that in midlle off all students and parents and no 1 says nothing ,there is no point to do that in exams, no diference if they were by themselfs as the others dont exist
9/18/2018 c8 Guest
Yo dude you rought chapter 7 twice
Yo dude you rought chapter 7 twice