for Naruto: Shinobi of Lust10/20/2011 c1 
2pensuka
is is awsome please in name of all that is holy update it *gets a bowl of popcorn* this will be awsome! *takes a small handfull of popcorn and eats it*
2pensukais is awsome please in name of all that is holy update it *gets a bowl of popcorn* this will be awsome! *takes a small handfull of popcorn and eats it*
10/20/2011 c1 Guest
Really good story hope you update soon. I really hope you add these women to it Tsume and Hana Inuzuka, Tsunade, Shizune, Temari, Tsunami, Yugao, Samui, Karui, Mabui, Mei, Mikoto Uchiha and Yoshino Nara I know she is married to Shikamaru's Dad but she isn't use at all. Hope you update soon and keep up the good work.
Really good story hope you update soon. I really hope you add these women to it Tsume and Hana Inuzuka, Tsunade, Shizune, Temari, Tsunami, Yugao, Samui, Karui, Mabui, Mei, Mikoto Uchiha and Yoshino Nara I know she is married to Shikamaru's Dad but she isn't use at all. Hope you update soon and keep up the good work.
10/20/2011 c1 1LunarCatNinja
This story has an interesting idea, and I think Tamari would be a good girl for the Harem, along with Tayuya, and Kin. ≡∩W∩≡
1LunarCatNinjaThis story has an interesting idea, and I think Tamari would be a good girl for the Harem, along with Tayuya, and Kin. ≡∩W∩≡
10/20/2011 c1 17Silverscale
I'd suggest Mei the sexy Mizukage, Tsunade the Great Sucker, Possibly the other tailed beasts as females, Hana and Tsume Inuzuka, Mikoto Uchiha, FemHaku, Samui, Yugito, Tayuya, Kin and Kanon. Just suggestions though, pick at your own leasure.
17SilverscaleI'd suggest Mei the sexy Mizukage, Tsunade the Great Sucker, Possibly the other tailed beasts as females, Hana and Tsume Inuzuka, Mikoto Uchiha, FemHaku, Samui, Yugito, Tayuya, Kin and Kanon. Just suggestions though, pick at your own leasure.
10/20/2011 c1 12The First-Born
Oh that was quite entertaining! Too bad it wasn't like... 10 chapters long cuz I was just getting into it. I'll wait around for a while and see what else you write, if it's as good as this then you've made a fan. I'll also check out your other works to see what's up with them, I don't remember if I've read any of yours before now. Good luck with this... no pressure.
12The First-BornOh that was quite entertaining! Too bad it wasn't like... 10 chapters long cuz I was just getting into it. I'll wait around for a while and see what else you write, if it's as good as this then you've made a fan. I'll also check out your other works to see what's up with them, I don't remember if I've read any of yours before now. Good luck with this... no pressure.
10/20/2011 c1 I'MNOTCRAZY1
Would you put spaces when there are thoughts. It's almost impossible to read it when there aren't any. Italics are all you need to make it clear that the words are thoughts/unspoken words or flashbacks (depending on the context).
Would you put spaces when there are thoughts. It's almost impossible to read it when there aren't any. Italics are all you need to make it clear that the words are thoughts/unspoken words or flashbacks (depending on the context).
10/20/2011 c1 Magikmaster02
I enjoyed the first chapter and can't wait for the next one. However I'd like to see mei terumi in the mix please
I enjoyed the first chapter and can't wait for the next one. However I'd like to see mei terumi in the mix please
10/20/2011 c1 1dbzsotrum9
Add Tsunami, Tayuya, Shizune, Tsunade, Kushina, Mikoto, Temari, Ayame, Ino, Yugao, and Hana... that will be flippin awesome
1dbzsotrum9Add Tsunami, Tayuya, Shizune, Tsunade, Kushina, Mikoto, Temari, Ayame, Ino, Yugao, and Hana... that will be flippin awesome
10/20/2011 c1 warprince2000
Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)(can you make this into a Harem fanfic?)(can you Plz add Hinata, Sakura, Ino, Anko, Tenten, and Temari to Naruto's Harem)
Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)(can you make this into a Harem fanfic?)(can you Plz add Hinata, Sakura, Ino, Anko, Tenten, and Temari to Naruto's Harem)
10/20/2011 c1 Knightofzero
I'd like to see Samui,Konan,Mei,Karui,Guren,Shiho and Kurotsuchi.
I'd like to see Samui,Konan,Mei,Karui,Guren,Shiho and Kurotsuchi.