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6/14/2020 c6 78Swa-Sa Masou
This was super cute!
I will admit that I was unsure why Edward couldn't pick the teacher answer out of Charlie's head, but it made for a cute conversation between them later.
12/11/2016 c4 LaurelLeafSinger
Jacob wins the tests that please Charlie but Edward wins the tests that matter to his Bella. Jacob is the son and buddy that Charlie prefers-no surprise. Bella is NOT Charlie, and her preferences have been made clear.

And those dresses are a Charlie made trap, Bella. Watch out! It's hard to believe canon Charlie would go shopping, especially for his daughter! Haha. Seriously, I feel bad for Bella here as this whole competition is uncomfortable for her and Charlie seems kind of mean.

Well written and look forward to reading more of your stories.
12/8/2016 c1 LaurelLeafSinger
Interesting idea for your story. Well written.

Ugh, a smug Jacob and you brought up an issue that I noticed in Eclipse (and that your Bella here is thinking): that Charlie acts as if Jacob is more his child than Bella is. At various points, Charlie sticks up for the obnoxious Jacob rather his own daughter in Eclipse. It was disturbing and you would think, hurtful, to Bella. No wonder her self worth is precarious.

So a weekend with a vampire and werewolf under the Swan roof? Poor Bella!
10/29/2015 c6 not used anymore sorry
I love it.:)
10/29/2015 c5 not used anymore sorry
And that was beautiful!:)
10/29/2015 c4 not used anymore sorry
Edward, pleeeaasssee win!
10/29/2015 c3 not used anymore sorry
Nice fluff!:)
10/29/2015 c2 not used anymore sorry
Edward's such a sweetheart.:)
10/29/2015 c1 not used anymore sorry
Poor Bella.:(
4/20/2013 c6 Guest
Thank the gods Charlie chose Edward very good story.
9/8/2012 c6 3Nyx'sReincarnation
Amazing story! Good ol' Charlie... LOL
Keep up the great work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
11/14/2011 c6 11euphoricxdreamer
Toooooo sweet!
11/11/2011 c6 radioactive77
Very sweet.
11/11/2011 c6 weml
Great final chapter. Thanks for writing
11/11/2011 c6 13immortalwizardpirateelf-fan
I am sorry but I feel that Charlie was a FUCKING ASSHOLE! His idea was stupid and ignorant. Jacob is a bastard. Who's to say he wouldn't imprint on someone else while he was with Bella, leaving Bella BROKEN and without her soulmate again. You know damn well if Charlie had chosen Jacob and forced Edward out, Edward would leave and stay as far away as he could while using Alice to keep tabs. Bella is 18 years old, a leagal adult. I would think the fact that she punched Jacob and broke her hand in doing so would have shown Charlie just how badly Jacob HURT Bella forcing that kiss on her. Fucking mutt. But NOOOOOOOOOO all Charlie sees is his little is growing and moving away. NEWSFLASH! All kids do that.
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