for Misstep in the Right Direction3/18 c1 arianamax177
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Your story "Misstep in the Right Direction" has the makings of something legendary a world waiting to be explored, characters aching to be seen, and a plot begging to unfold in stunning visuals!
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2/11 c7 
6SonarTex43
I wished you'd had the Hokage gift them with a jutsu for them, specifically the Shadow Clone Jutsu for Naruto, and the Shadow Shuriken Jutsu for Hinata.
6SonarTex43I wished you'd had the Hokage gift them with a jutsu for them, specifically the Shadow Clone Jutsu for Naruto, and the Shadow Shuriken Jutsu for Hinata.
12/9/2024 c19 dixonjason403
its a shame the story got abandoned. it started off slow as balls and a bit boring, but its over just when it was actually getting interesting .
its a shame the story got abandoned. it started off slow as balls and a bit boring, but its over just when it was actually getting interesting .
12/9/2024 c17 dixonjason403
on the plus side, theyre doing this WAY earlier than canon, so they get to dodge all the canon bullshit with orochimaru and gaara. on the other hand, a "normal" chuunin exam sounds pretty boring.
on the plus side, theyre doing this WAY earlier than canon, so they get to dodge all the canon bullshit with orochimaru and gaara. on the other hand, a "normal" chuunin exam sounds pretty boring.
12/9/2024 c9 dixonjason403
if naruto's only offense is shitty martial arts and borked seals that launch stuff then he's kinda fucked, at least until someone kicks his shit in enough that beast chakra stuff happens.
if naruto's only offense is shitty martial arts and borked seals that launch stuff then he's kinda fucked, at least until someone kicks his shit in enough that beast chakra stuff happens.
12/9/2024 c8 dixonjason403
so this naruto is ironically already vastly weaker than canon (as of now), despite not being a fuckup who failed a bunch of times. without the shadow clones early naruto is nearly useless. hell even with them he isnt very good.
so this naruto is ironically already vastly weaker than canon (as of now), despite not being a fuckup who failed a bunch of times. without the shadow clones early naruto is nearly useless. hell even with them he isnt very good.
12/9/2024 c6 dixonjason403
what the fuck is even the POINT of this story? nothing is happening. if anything, the divergences have removed more plot then theyve added, its become boring as hell.
what the fuck is even the POINT of this story? nothing is happening. if anything, the divergences have removed more plot then theyve added, its become boring as hell.
12/9/2024 c5 dixonjason403
eh this is getting a bit cringe. i like romance WITH my plot, not romance AS the plot.
eh this is getting a bit cringe. i like romance WITH my plot, not romance AS the plot.
9/18/2023 c1 Alisha
Soooo cute what a great first chapter
Soooo cute what a great first chapter
6/11/2023 c20 Danny Williams
This is a great story.
Shame that it is lying on the wayside with no updates.
Hope aurthor decides to update soom.
This is a great story.
Shame that it is lying on the wayside with no updates.
Hope aurthor decides to update soom.
5/10/2023 c20 19BornOnTheBreakOfDawn
I binged read this and I really enjoyed the story! I hope this gets continued one day.
Great job for writing this!
19BornOnTheBreakOfDawnI binged read this and I really enjoyed the story! I hope this gets continued one day.
Great job for writing this!
3/26/2023 c20 codywhite162
This is such an excellent story! I truly hope you come back to it again someday!
This is such an excellent story! I truly hope you come back to it again someday!
3/4/2023 c20 10jukehero461
Excellent first exam idea! I hope you return to this story, I've been enjoying it so far!
10jukehero461Excellent first exam idea! I hope you return to this story, I've been enjoying it so far!
1/14/2023 c2 alefrosier
I'm really tired of this focus on Ramen in almost all Naruto fanfics, it's already starting to disgust me, even more so when they make him act like classic Naruto which is almost completely retarded.
I'm really tired of this focus on Ramen in almost all Naruto fanfics, it's already starting to disgust me, even more so when they make him act like classic Naruto which is almost completely retarded.