
6/18/2022 c8
1OkaTaufiqAlHafidz
I'm sure Jiraiya, Naruto, and Hinata made my mood better, but only in this exclusive story

I'm sure Jiraiya, Naruto, and Hinata made my mood better, but only in this exclusive story
6/18/2022 c6 OkaTaufiqAlHafidz
Honestly from the bottom of my heart, reading this is not easy because I'm touched
Honestly from the bottom of my heart, reading this is not easy because I'm touched
6/12/2022 c20 Danny Williams
As usual a great story.
Story is way behind on updates.
Story is too good to let fade from memory.
As usual a great story.
Story is way behind on updates.
Story is too good to let fade from memory.
3/31/2022 c20 Zeke Hooper
cool story.
cool story.
3/22/2022 c20 Guest
A great story to read with plenty of action and suspense.
Story should be updated a lot of times for it's fans.
A great story to read with plenty of action and suspense.
Story should be updated a lot of times for it's fans.
3/23/2022 c20 1.6180339887498948482045868
I really enjoyed this. Great story. The only thing I think could be improved is if you clearly indicated when the POV changes, like when going from Naruto/Hina/Lee to Iruka. It's kind of jolting to all of a sudden change POV like that. Hope you continue this eventually.
I really enjoyed this. Great story. The only thing I think could be improved is if you clearly indicated when the POV changes, like when going from Naruto/Hina/Lee to Iruka. It's kind of jolting to all of a sudden change POV like that. Hope you continue this eventually.
11/12/2021 c19
5Planar-Walking-Entertainment
Karin always seemed in canon to be more Yandere-ish when it concerns her love interests. Hope that trend doesn't happen here.

Karin always seemed in canon to be more Yandere-ish when it concerns her love interests. Hope that trend doesn't happen here.
10/28/2021 c20 TauCetiEarth
hope you're doing well.. even though I wish there was more to read.. it's good stuff
hope you're doing well.. even though I wish there was more to read.. it's good stuff
10/23/2021 c20 Wilsor
I am absolutely in love with this fanfic! Please, come baaaaack! T.T
I am absolutely in love with this fanfic! Please, come baaaaack! T.T
9/10/2021 c20 Guest
This story is beautiful thank you for posting as much as you have
This story is beautiful thank you for posting as much as you have
8/17/2021 c20 Danny Williams
Great story have read several time.
Story has plenty of action, suspense and some romance.
Story is missing many updates about 2 years worth.
Would appreciate updates for this story (great).
Great story have read several time.
Story has plenty of action, suspense and some romance.
Story is missing many updates about 2 years worth.
Would appreciate updates for this story (great).