for Misstep in the Right Direction3/24/2021 c20 PoCATo
Question number 1! Did Naruto read about his clan in the library? Any other seal books too? And did he speak with Genma and the others who knew his dad at all after that first encounter?
Question number 2! Will Hinata learn Genjutsu or just stay with Medical? Will she learn more of her ex-clan techniques? Probably a spoiler. No need to answer spoilers a winky face will do
Question number 3! In a movie Rock Lee knew how to use nunchuks, will he be able to do the same here? What about his team mates? Will Naruto get a weapon? Will Hinata? I know it's probably overused in fanfic, but using bow and arrows is something the byakugan seem to be useful for, besides the gentle fist and medicine.
Final question for now! What will happen with Mizuki, you said that Aoi has not only the sword, but also a scroll, is it the forbidden one? What will Mizuki do. But more important, when will Naruto learn the shadow clones? Will it be once Jiraiya decides to make himself known?
AAAAAAAAAAH! SO MANY THINGS UNSOLVED PLZ COME BACK SOON! but if you need time because real life is a bad bitch just tell me off
Question number 1! Did Naruto read about his clan in the library? Any other seal books too? And did he speak with Genma and the others who knew his dad at all after that first encounter?
Question number 2! Will Hinata learn Genjutsu or just stay with Medical? Will she learn more of her ex-clan techniques? Probably a spoiler. No need to answer spoilers a winky face will do
Question number 3! In a movie Rock Lee knew how to use nunchuks, will he be able to do the same here? What about his team mates? Will Naruto get a weapon? Will Hinata? I know it's probably overused in fanfic, but using bow and arrows is something the byakugan seem to be useful for, besides the gentle fist and medicine.
Final question for now! What will happen with Mizuki, you said that Aoi has not only the sword, but also a scroll, is it the forbidden one? What will Mizuki do. But more important, when will Naruto learn the shadow clones? Will it be once Jiraiya decides to make himself known?
AAAAAAAAAAH! SO MANY THINGS UNSOLVED PLZ COME BACK SOON! but if you need time because real life is a bad bitch just tell me off
2/21/2021 c20 Danny Williams
Very good story as I have said before.
Story just needs several updates to bring it up todate.
Very good story as I have said before.
Story just needs several updates to bring it up todate.
2/7/2021 c20 Danny Williams
Have read and reread this story several time, great has plenty of action, suspense and some romance,.
Could use some more romance/sex scenes in coming chapters,
Glad you have the story laid out to the finish.
You show be able to whip out several updates quite easily over night.
Please post several update to this story (so I can continue on with story).
Have read and reread this story several time, great has plenty of action, suspense and some romance,.
Could use some more romance/sex scenes in coming chapters,
Glad you have the story laid out to the finish.
You show be able to whip out several updates quite easily over night.
Please post several update to this story (so I can continue on with story).
1/28/2021 c20 Danny Williams
Still impressed with story after having read several times.
Story has plenty of action, suspense and thrills and chills.
Story needs a couple of updates.
Still impressed with story after having read several times.
Story has plenty of action, suspense and thrills and chills.
Story needs a couple of updates.
10/3/2020 c20 Guest
10/10
10/10
9/30/2020 c1 Guest
You have nack of stating the obvious, even the smallest thing, which stretches the story unnecessarily.
Also you waste time in fillers like that conversation with the girl in kurama clan and about idate(ibiki's brother) and many such scenes which does not help forward the storyline or even helps in character development, hell i think you dont have a storyline, you just thought of the beginning and started using whatever characters you knew to keep weaving every day new experience they have with new people.
I hope you understand the story must move forward in a good pace and yours is the one of the most slowest and a little boring speed.
Good luck tho
You have nack of stating the obvious, even the smallest thing, which stretches the story unnecessarily.
Also you waste time in fillers like that conversation with the girl in kurama clan and about idate(ibiki's brother) and many such scenes which does not help forward the storyline or even helps in character development, hell i think you dont have a storyline, you just thought of the beginning and started using whatever characters you knew to keep weaving every day new experience they have with new people.
I hope you understand the story must move forward in a good pace and yours is the one of the most slowest and a little boring speed.
Good luck tho
9/27/2020 c17 
1Panjason
Woah saying Rock Lee can surpass Maito Guy is like saying he has the potential to maybe even beat Madara or at least get really damn close. Wasn’t Guy declared stronger than all the Kages including the Raikage by Madara?
1PanjasonWoah saying Rock Lee can surpass Maito Guy is like saying he has the potential to maybe even beat Madara or at least get really damn close. Wasn’t Guy declared stronger than all the Kages including the Raikage by Madara?
9/13/2020 c20 Danny Williams
I read this Naruto spin-off and still as impressed with it as the first read.
Would like to have more romance/sex scenes with Naruto and Hinata.
This story needs to be updated for your fans if nothing else.
I read this Naruto spin-off and still as impressed with it as the first read.
Would like to have more romance/sex scenes with Naruto and Hinata.
This story needs to be updated for your fans if nothing else.
8/17/2020 c20 Shifuru
More! This ought to be one of the best team comps I've seen in fan fics. Their synergy is just amazing. Will Naruto get his signature Kage Bunshin no Jutsu soon, though? 'Cause it will really help in expediting his fūinjutsu studies and more.
More! This ought to be one of the best team comps I've seen in fan fics. Their synergy is just amazing. Will Naruto get his signature Kage Bunshin no Jutsu soon, though? 'Cause it will really help in expediting his fūinjutsu studies and more.
8/8/2020 c4 Ziggy
Why are the hyuga mostly such assholes? I don't get it. They think of a member as a failure if their not the best, they have the caged bird seal (basically making the branch family a slave family), and they're mostly toxic! (not saying anything bad about this fanfic, just about the hyuga clan)
Why are the hyuga mostly such assholes? I don't get it. They think of a member as a failure if their not the best, they have the caged bird seal (basically making the branch family a slave family), and they're mostly toxic! (not saying anything bad about this fanfic, just about the hyuga clan)
8/8/2020 c20 4El Publicano
¿Estás haciendo un doctorado? Eso... es genial, felicidades.
Está historia es genial, me gusta como llevas la relación entre los personajes y el progreso que estos llevan a lo largo de esta historia. El como la relación de Naruto y Hinata fluye como agua y de cierta manera se ve "natural" (siendo honesto, que fuera desterrada no es natural, no por ahora xd). Y, es la primera vez que leo sobre un equipo conformado por Lee, Naruto y Hinata, y ¡Gai-sensei!. Está súper genial, creelo.
El que Hinata estuviera destrozada después de ser marcada y dejada de lado por su familia, pero poco a poco fue creciendo y superandose hasta dejar la timidez es un desarrollo muy bueno, para un personaje como ella. Y, que decidiera no tapar el sello, demuestra que a ella no le afecta, ahora en el presente, ese hecho. Asumo que la familia que está "formando" con Naruto tiene parte que ver en eso. También espero ver cómo vas a abordar el asunto entre las hermanas...
Y como le das protagonismo en las escenas a los demás personajes también es genial, los aprovechas bien, no como otras historias en las que los abandonan por completo hasta que los necesitan para algo específico. Que Sasuke y Neji, en un equipo no pasaran, es el resultado más esperado. Esos dos no están aptos para trabajar en equipo por ahora, lo más probable es que Sasuke apuñale a Tenten con un chidori y Neji se convierta en "Tobi" xdxd.
Espero con ansias una actualización de esto, y quiero desearte buena salud en esta situación de emergencia en la que estamos, toma precauciones y cuidate.
PD: Me encanta que Naruto y Hinata parezcan casados xd, en ciertos momentos le da un toque cómico.
4El Publicano¿Estás haciendo un doctorado? Eso... es genial, felicidades.
Está historia es genial, me gusta como llevas la relación entre los personajes y el progreso que estos llevan a lo largo de esta historia. El como la relación de Naruto y Hinata fluye como agua y de cierta manera se ve "natural" (siendo honesto, que fuera desterrada no es natural, no por ahora xd). Y, es la primera vez que leo sobre un equipo conformado por Lee, Naruto y Hinata, y ¡Gai-sensei!. Está súper genial, creelo.
El que Hinata estuviera destrozada después de ser marcada y dejada de lado por su familia, pero poco a poco fue creciendo y superandose hasta dejar la timidez es un desarrollo muy bueno, para un personaje como ella. Y, que decidiera no tapar el sello, demuestra que a ella no le afecta, ahora en el presente, ese hecho. Asumo que la familia que está "formando" con Naruto tiene parte que ver en eso. También espero ver cómo vas a abordar el asunto entre las hermanas...
Y como le das protagonismo en las escenas a los demás personajes también es genial, los aprovechas bien, no como otras historias en las que los abandonan por completo hasta que los necesitan para algo específico. Que Sasuke y Neji, en un equipo no pasaran, es el resultado más esperado. Esos dos no están aptos para trabajar en equipo por ahora, lo más probable es que Sasuke apuñale a Tenten con un chidori y Neji se convierta en "Tobi" xdxd.
Espero con ansias una actualización de esto, y quiero desearte buena salud en esta situación de emergencia en la que estamos, toma precauciones y cuidate.
PD: Me encanta que Naruto y Hinata parezcan casados xd, en ciertos momentos le da un toque cómico.