for I Felt It, Too11/26/2011 c1 
1Lady Skyelite
I am curious to know when you plan to update this, It is starting out to be a great story. Are you going to do any flashbacks/backstory to tell us what happened to bring the srory to it's start point? I for one would like to see some(not too godawlful many, but the more important ones), as I think they can add clairity to a story. You are doing a wonderful job on this so far, and I hope you add a little Major/God of War into the mix. I would love to see your interpetation of Jasper Whitlock, in all of his glorious forms! Thank you,Lady Skyelite
1Lady SkyeliteI am curious to know when you plan to update this, It is starting out to be a great story. Are you going to do any flashbacks/backstory to tell us what happened to bring the srory to it's start point? I for one would like to see some(not too godawlful many, but the more important ones), as I think they can add clairity to a story. You are doing a wonderful job on this so far, and I hope you add a little Major/God of War into the mix. I would love to see your interpetation of Jasper Whitlock, in all of his glorious forms! Thank you,Lady Skyelite
11/22/2011 c1 Guest
Great story so far! I look forward to reading more soon.
Great story so far! I look forward to reading more soon.
10/28/2011 c1 deltagrl
GOOD CHAP. CURIOUS TO HOW J WAS TYED UP OR LOCKED AWAY. AND IS A A PART OF WHAT HAPPENED
GOOD CHAP. CURIOUS TO HOW J WAS TYED UP OR LOCKED AWAY. AND IS A A PART OF WHAT HAPPENED
10/23/2011 c1 1fallensidhe
OMG! you HAVE to write more of this... I am completely intrigued. this was wonderfully written and I look forward to reading more (hopefully) in the future. :)
1fallensidheOMG! you HAVE to write more of this... I am completely intrigued. this was wonderfully written and I look forward to reading more (hopefully) in the future. :)