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10/16/2015 c37 Guest
Airachnid. Creative. Well-played.
8/18/2015 c50 Rhojngu457
Awesome story! I loved every part of it! Caterwaul is now one of my favorite OCs :). Sorry I didn't review the other chapters, I was saving one for the end of this story. I really like the idea of Cybertronians who avenge others but don't kill (I'm not too fond of killing). The ending was very unexpected yet very touching :). Caterwaul*Breakdown relationship will be quite interesting in the next story. I'll go to that one right away :). See ya till then ;).
2/17/2015 c50 Arctic Fox from Afar
Alright Charcoal, BACK THE FUCK OFF.
You. Are. An. ASS.
How DARE you think you have the right to act like some selfish god-sent saint of a legendary freaking writer!? How dare you even think you can just waltz around like Shakespeare reincarnated and tell everyone about the ways they're OBVIOUSLY such a HORRIFIC FAILURE. Well, guess what, Jerk?
You suck.
That's right, I called it.
YOU.
FREAKING.
SUCK.
BALLS.
Jump off a freaking cliff and impale yourself on a freaking stalagmite you BASTARD!

And as for YOU, esteemed author, you ROCK. Do not, I repeat, DO NOT let petty low-life Flamers drag you down. You GO, and if ANYBODY says different, I will kick their ass to freaking Canada and back! And I've got at least two friends to back me up! Keep on and OC on!
And as for you, " Charcoal Alchemist" ...
* flips the middle finger*
FUCK OFF YOU DAMN BASTARD!
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Whew...
Glad I got that out of my system...
Chow!
5/10/2013 c3 1Starsong008
That's the Starscream we all know and love (well, at least I do). Really funny how Caterwaul ate poor Star's wings, reminds me of my cat Henry who eats ANYTHING(and my dog Sasha, who eats something worse)! I must continue reading while eating Zappo's and chips. Your stories rule,
Starsong008
4/5/2013 c50 5The-Charcoal-Alchemist
I sat through all fifty chapters of this story, because I can't legitimately say if I liked this story or not until I had finished it. Now that I have...

This story is incredibly bland, to the point where it didn't matter if I was reading chapter 6 or Chapter 39, the events were predictable and about as exciting as clipping toenails. Caterwaul is a gigantic Mary Sue, and you will learn nothing playing her as she is. She always wins, and even when she 'loses', she gets the better end of the deal, and gets the reward in the next chapter, anyway.

This wasn't even a story, really; it was a fifty chapter Starscream-hating session, with liberal amounts of god-modding and just a smidgeon of romance. Almost every Canon character was so far out of character that this wasn't even funny.

If your intention was to write a troll-fic, then I must congratulate you on your dedication. If this effort was genuine...then I sincerely hope that, at some point in the future, you look back on this story, and are embarrassed by what you read, because shame is a great teacher.
2/14/2013 c50 Jazz330674
Love this story! Great job :-)
2/2/2013 c50 1SH4D0WST4LK3R
this issss sssooo awsome.

MWHAHAHAHAHAH
2/2/2013 c4 SH4D0WST4LK3R
This is one of the insanest things I have read so far... I LOVE IT

MWHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA
12/21/2012 c50 4Abyss Prime
Awesome!
10/28/2012 c50 8Iceshadow911247
-gasp- -cries- NO! I DON'T WANT IT TO END! ;-;

Well, Caterwaul... you're not the only one afraid of TF Prime Optimus... he can be scary at times...

This... this is where you end it?! THIS?! THIS ONE PLACE IS WHERE YOU END IT?!
You listen, and you listen good. You put up the sequel soon, or I will find you, and I will look through your windows at night and watch you until you put up the new story! :U
10/28/2012 c50 TheThingThatSmiles
Yay! Can't wait for the sequel! And Primus! It has been a week ever since I lost my sugar! Please send brakdown and order him to tell my dad to give me sugar or its 'hammer time'.

This story is officially more amazing than epicnesss. It was funny! The order of sequence was ok. Your vocab is ok and your OC was awesome. Although I would never think of having her eat metal. Wouldn't that be considered as cannibalissm? Lol I can't spell it! ANYWAYS: this story is my favorite and I'm sad that this is the ending! You leave me at a cliffhanger -.-
10/28/2012 c50 26Autobot StarRacer
AWWWWWWWW! Hurry and post the sequel!
10/28/2012 c50 5Incognito Llama
Th-there is a-a-a-a n-n-ne-e-new one? A sequal? 0 I shout for joy!
10/28/2012 c50 13Airachnid-Femme
...AW! LOVE LOVE LOVE!
10/21/2012 c49 Airachnid-Femme
...BREAKDOWN YOU FRAGGING IDIOT!

Sorry, he scratched KnockOut. Anywho, I don't think BreakDown going to very happy with Caterwaul. I bet he's going to be silent while she's talking to him,

"BreakDown?"
*silence*
"BreakDown?"
*More silence*

I wonder if he's going to expose her. Hmmm...
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