for Duty of a Dragonlord5/4/2018 c1 EmotionalDreamer101
That was good, I really loved that. Arthur is so good to Merlin, I love how understanding he was of his feelings about the cave and of Balinor :’)
That was good, I really loved that. Arthur is so good to Merlin, I love how understanding he was of his feelings about the cave and of Balinor :’)
11/10/2017 c1 
12Crystalzap
I wouldn't really think Arthur would remember that either, but he can surprise you sometimes
12CrystalzapI wouldn't really think Arthur would remember that either, but he can surprise you sometimes
7/19/2017 c1 11PurpleFlyingBird
This was a really good and original idea. I like how nicely it fits into the episode. :)
The characters were in character and well written. It was a really enjoyable read! :D
Thank you for writing it!
Keep up the good work.
11PurpleFlyingBirdThis was a really good and original idea. I like how nicely it fits into the episode. :)
The characters were in character and well written. It was a really enjoyable read! :D
Thank you for writing it!
Keep up the good work.
8/27/2013 c1 22BlackBandit111
This was an amazing oneshot that really displayed Merlin's wisdom and Arthur's gentle sided personality. I loved how Gwaine was also mentioned many times- it made the situation seem more real, that someone noticed that Merlin was jumpy. The last sentence...beautiful. Amazingly done.
22BlackBandit111This was an amazing oneshot that really displayed Merlin's wisdom and Arthur's gentle sided personality. I loved how Gwaine was also mentioned many times- it made the situation seem more real, that someone noticed that Merlin was jumpy. The last sentence...beautiful. Amazingly done.
8/31/2012 c1 5servant123
Very, very cool idea, and super well-executed. I have absolutely no critiques about the writing itself, and the only thing I can really wish for otherwise is more; a longer conversation about what kind of man Balinor was, and what had actually happened to him that had made him so bitter towards Uther; and maybe a keepsake Merlin could take from the cave; a carving, a small book of magic or dragons, a ring that signified his position as a Dragonlord, something that he could keep, hidden with his magic, until the day that the prophesy is fulfilled. Anyways, I really, really enjoyed this fic. It's beautifully written and a unique, touching idea, and the ending lines were perfectly chosen. Keep up the amazing work. I look forward to reading more from you soon :)
God bless *heart*
5servant123Very, very cool idea, and super well-executed. I have absolutely no critiques about the writing itself, and the only thing I can really wish for otherwise is more; a longer conversation about what kind of man Balinor was, and what had actually happened to him that had made him so bitter towards Uther; and maybe a keepsake Merlin could take from the cave; a carving, a small book of magic or dragons, a ring that signified his position as a Dragonlord, something that he could keep, hidden with his magic, until the day that the prophesy is fulfilled. Anyways, I really, really enjoyed this fic. It's beautifully written and a unique, touching idea, and the ending lines were perfectly chosen. Keep up the amazing work. I look forward to reading more from you soon :)
God bless *heart*
7/29/2012 c1 4intensewhatever
I loved this! I've never seen a fic with this idea and I thought it was so cool! Awesome job! :)
4intensewhateverI loved this! I've never seen a fic with this idea and I thought it was so cool! Awesome job! :)
2/25/2012 c1 5allston0901
This story is really sweet. And I really appreciate your inclusion of spoiler warnings. I wish more people did that. :)
5allston0901This story is really sweet. And I really appreciate your inclusion of spoiler warnings. I wish more people did that. :)
1/27/2012 c1 34Ecri
That was lovely. I've just seen "Aithusa" for the first time tonight, and came looking for tags and missing scenes. This was a lovely, sweet, heartfelt addition to the story, and I'm glad to see some mention of Balinor. Merlin must have been thinking of his father throughout the story. This was a nice nod in that direction. Well done.
34EcriThat was lovely. I've just seen "Aithusa" for the first time tonight, and came looking for tags and missing scenes. This was a lovely, sweet, heartfelt addition to the story, and I'm glad to see some mention of Balinor. Merlin must have been thinking of his father throughout the story. This was a nice nod in that direction. Well done.
11/25/2011 c1 10CosmicEssence
oooh nice. I do have to wonder if the location of where they ventured through to reach the egg was done on purpose or not...I mean they've reused 'scenes' before so why not here, except this cave entrance and waterfall is a little too memorable..
10CosmicEssenceoooh nice. I do have to wonder if the location of where they ventured through to reach the egg was done on purpose or not...I mean they've reused 'scenes' before so why not here, except this cave entrance and waterfall is a little too memorable..