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9/25/2018 c1 Noodles
Hmm.. it's bit short but I find myself on not being a fan on the pairing. It's ehhh for me. Sorry but good luck on your writing.
12/10/2014 c1 dezeya
It was very abrupt
6/9/2014 c1 DEMON KING DANTE
it was so short
10/24/2012 c1 negilover
i love that story their my fav
7/10/2012 c1 turtlefan16
Very cute.
1/22/2012 c1 thisaccoutnisdeletednow
Yeah. Like in the other review, grammar (I know it isn't your first language). Length: It's too short. It moved very quickly, there could be some more emotion between the two. Three: realism. I know that it isn't real, but maybe the mature content could have happened after some more dialogue or some sort of connection. But overall, nice job. :)
10/25/2011 c1 Anonymous
You're gonna want to bump up the rating on this to M...

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