for A New Chance For Adventure7/10/2024 c8 XXX777
Will Ash be getting a Zoroark? Also will Latias be the only female Pokemon in love with Ash?
Will Ash be getting a Zoroark? Also will Latias be the only female Pokemon in love with Ash?
7/7/2024 c41 Envoy of Importance
Well well well... it looks like I was right...
I took an extended hiatus from a lot of my past times over the last few years to focus on my studies (with a full year of greek being a massive pain that I never want to repeat), and now that I am done with that, I can finally take the time to catch up on some of my favorite fics that I used to follow. It looks like the reveal at the end of this chapter though has shocked quite a large amount of people. A lot of people except for me, because I called it! I called it back when I was in the Discord! I was 100% percent right regarding the fact that SP-OI LE RSP OILERS (actually, jury is still out for that, while I am ultimately right, my reasoning for being right could be way off the mark). The real question now is why was the mother not present for most of the twin's lives? She was able to visit, but clearly there was something stopping her from remaining there. Very interested in seeing how this proceeds. And any additional details we get from this would further shed light on the villain working in the
Well well well... it looks like I was right...
I took an extended hiatus from a lot of my past times over the last few years to focus on my studies (with a full year of greek being a massive pain that I never want to repeat), and now that I am done with that, I can finally take the time to catch up on some of my favorite fics that I used to follow. It looks like the reveal at the end of this chapter though has shocked quite a large amount of people. A lot of people except for me, because I called it! I called it back when I was in the Discord! I was 100% percent right regarding the fact that SP-OI LE RSP OILERS (actually, jury is still out for that, while I am ultimately right, my reasoning for being right could be way off the mark). The real question now is why was the mother not present for most of the twin's lives? She was able to visit, but clearly there was something stopping her from remaining there. Very interested in seeing how this proceeds. And any additional details we get from this would further shed light on the villain working in the
6/14/2024 c41 Guest
I know of a way to make the story better: have Latios Sr. and Ho-Oh join Ash so their never separated from their children again and have Jessie and James decide to travel with Ash and his team.
I know of a way to make the story better: have Latios Sr. and Ho-Oh join Ash so their never separated from their children again and have Jessie and James decide to travel with Ash and his team.
5/7/2024 c41 Guest
I feel like there’s some sort of setup for either Ho-Oh or the Father Latios to get brainwashed either by the Prison Ball (that thing that hasn’t shown up for some time along with the whole Team Rocket plotline) or by Azrael later on in the story.
I might be so wrong on this, but the twins having to confront a brainwashed parent in a later chapter after being reunited with them would does sound plausible
I feel like there’s some sort of setup for either Ho-Oh or the Father Latios to get brainwashed either by the Prison Ball (that thing that hasn’t shown up for some time along with the whole Team Rocket plotline) or by Azrael later on in the story.
I might be so wrong on this, but the twins having to confront a brainwashed parent in a later chapter after being reunited with them would does sound plausible
5/6/2024 c27 PowerMaster17
Pls read my story Ben 10 True Omniverse it's really good
Pls read my story Ben 10 True Omniverse it's really good
3/24/2024 c41 crimsonflare
PLEASE COME BACK and KEEP GOING with this AWESOME story! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
PLEASE COME BACK and KEEP GOING with this AWESOME story! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
3/21/2024 c29 dragonflamefairy
if steven is going to enter the hoenn league then ash is going to stymied and jipped out of another league win since steven's pokemon are super strong and undefeated
if steven is going to enter the hoenn league then ash is going to stymied and jipped out of another league win since steven's pokemon are super strong and undefeated
3/19/2024 c28 dragonflamefairy
having steven and cynthia as a married couple doesn't sound believable, no offence
having steven and cynthia as a married couple doesn't sound believable, no offence
3/15/2024 c24 dragonflamefairy
AMAZING chapter
BUT, did you REALLY have to use a word like DEIFIC, i LITERALLY had to stop reading to look it up BECAUSE i DIDN'T know WHAT it MENT, you could'nt have just used a word like celestial OR seraphic INSTEAD since THOSE would've been BETTER!
sorry for the honest opinionated ramble
ALSO PLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE CONTINUE THIS AMAZING STORY
AMAZING chapter
BUT, did you REALLY have to use a word like DEIFIC, i LITERALLY had to stop reading to look it up BECAUSE i DIDN'T know WHAT it MENT, you could'nt have just used a word like celestial OR seraphic INSTEAD since THOSE would've been BETTER!
sorry for the honest opinionated ramble
ALSO PLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE CONTINUE THIS AMAZING STORY
3/14/2024 c41 
1SGWarrior
I've never done an actual review before on this story EVER, and what better now to do so on this current chapter. So please... bare with me. I-I swear I'm good with words...
Anyway, here we go. Where to begin? Well, I have to say first of all, this was an absolute thrill of a chapter from start to finish. It was incredibly well written! Even the "breeding" mix-up part, which I absolutely loved your take on it. And I'll be honest, it's not the first time I heard that term be interpreted that way. I've seen some stuff, man. But I love Kaidra for that, as well as her whole personality.
But let's talk about what's personally, to me, the best aspect in this chapter. Latios and Latias finally meet their father! After all these years of only seeing him through the Soul Dew, now he's here in the flesh and being so loving to his children. It was such a wholehearted reunion between the three Latis, and it was so damn beautiful, dude. Want to know why it was so damn beautiful? Because as I soon as I got to this part, I almost had tears. Yeah, that's right. I legit almost had tears coming out my eyes. That's how powerful this aspect was.
And then we get to the long anticipated reveal of Ho-Oh being the twins' mother. Not sure how to feel about this exactly, but it supposedly makes sense. Given how many appearances she's had throughout the series, plus Latias having red fire powers. Hey, look, that's a callback! But I'd say this was genuinely a well worth build-up on your part. Yet there's still more that's yet to be revealed in due time, I hope. Latios Sr. and Ho-Oh still have a lot to talk about with the twins, and there's a lot of heavy weight that still befalls on Ash's shoulders, given you know what happened earlier on.
Now, let's have this review come to a conclusion. And I'll end it on high praise. You've really improved on your writing structure, and your storytelling when you first started drafting this series all those years ago. And with every chapter that builds so much climax, wholesomeness, humor, and drama, it's really shaping to become one of the greatest alter-canon stories I've ever read. Hopefully, more chapters will release eventually, because you left this one on QUITE a cliffhanger, buddy.
Anyway, hope this pleased you well enough! See ya around! :D
1SGWarriorI've never done an actual review before on this story EVER, and what better now to do so on this current chapter. So please... bare with me. I-I swear I'm good with words...
Anyway, here we go. Where to begin? Well, I have to say first of all, this was an absolute thrill of a chapter from start to finish. It was incredibly well written! Even the "breeding" mix-up part, which I absolutely loved your take on it. And I'll be honest, it's not the first time I heard that term be interpreted that way. I've seen some stuff, man. But I love Kaidra for that, as well as her whole personality.
But let's talk about what's personally, to me, the best aspect in this chapter. Latios and Latias finally meet their father! After all these years of only seeing him through the Soul Dew, now he's here in the flesh and being so loving to his children. It was such a wholehearted reunion between the three Latis, and it was so damn beautiful, dude. Want to know why it was so damn beautiful? Because as I soon as I got to this part, I almost had tears. Yeah, that's right. I legit almost had tears coming out my eyes. That's how powerful this aspect was.
And then we get to the long anticipated reveal of Ho-Oh being the twins' mother. Not sure how to feel about this exactly, but it supposedly makes sense. Given how many appearances she's had throughout the series, plus Latias having red fire powers. Hey, look, that's a callback! But I'd say this was genuinely a well worth build-up on your part. Yet there's still more that's yet to be revealed in due time, I hope. Latios Sr. and Ho-Oh still have a lot to talk about with the twins, and there's a lot of heavy weight that still befalls on Ash's shoulders, given you know what happened earlier on.
Now, let's have this review come to a conclusion. And I'll end it on high praise. You've really improved on your writing structure, and your storytelling when you first started drafting this series all those years ago. And with every chapter that builds so much climax, wholesomeness, humor, and drama, it's really shaping to become one of the greatest alter-canon stories I've ever read. Hopefully, more chapters will release eventually, because you left this one on QUITE a cliffhanger, buddy.
Anyway, hope this pleased you well enough! See ya around! :D
2/24/2024 c8 dragonflamefairy
this is as far as i've gotten in this fic/story, but can you answer my question DO jessie and james STOP chasing after pikachu, when they go to ash for help AND they also tell him what their boss wants and all of his plans?
this is as far as i've gotten in this fic/story, but can you answer my question DO jessie and james STOP chasing after pikachu, when they go to ash for help AND they also tell him what their boss wants and all of his plans?
1/29/2024 c41 Guest
Can't wait for this story to be updated
Can't wait for this story to be updated
12/29/2023 c41 Souboku
Man, coming back to this story (and its prequel) has been a rollercoaster of nostalgia.
You're an incredible writer; your ability to convey both a compelling story and such natural emotion is so, so good. Each character is unique, with their own quirks, flaws and progression. Everything about how they act and behave is so beautifully natural and believable. They feel *real*, you want to see how they grow, their ups and their downs. It's so rare to find a writer that so perfectly captures the ability to make a reader feel what a character feels, to experience the same relation and distress that they feel.
Pokémon Heroes holds a special place in my heart, my favourite Pokémon movie by far. Latias and Latios are easily my favourite Pokémon, and I adore the way you've written them across this (currently) 68 chapter journey. I've always felt like they've been underappreciated, and I don't think any piece of writing so perfectly captures their personalities as well as yours.
Please never lose your passion for writing. You are a gift to everyone who has the joy of finding your work, and even if you move on from Pokémon I hope that you'll continue to find joy in writing for whatever fandom piques your interest. Thank you for providing myself, and many others, with this joyous ride, that I will certainly be continuing to tag along for!
If I wasn't as socially awkward as Latios, I'd probably already be an active member in the discord server!
Man, coming back to this story (and its prequel) has been a rollercoaster of nostalgia.
You're an incredible writer; your ability to convey both a compelling story and such natural emotion is so, so good. Each character is unique, with their own quirks, flaws and progression. Everything about how they act and behave is so beautifully natural and believable. They feel *real*, you want to see how they grow, their ups and their downs. It's so rare to find a writer that so perfectly captures the ability to make a reader feel what a character feels, to experience the same relation and distress that they feel.
Pokémon Heroes holds a special place in my heart, my favourite Pokémon movie by far. Latias and Latios are easily my favourite Pokémon, and I adore the way you've written them across this (currently) 68 chapter journey. I've always felt like they've been underappreciated, and I don't think any piece of writing so perfectly captures their personalities as well as yours.
Please never lose your passion for writing. You are a gift to everyone who has the joy of finding your work, and even if you move on from Pokémon I hope that you'll continue to find joy in writing for whatever fandom piques your interest. Thank you for providing myself, and many others, with this joyous ride, that I will certainly be continuing to tag along for!
If I wasn't as socially awkward as Latios, I'd probably already be an active member in the discord server!