5/7/2020 c1 valash122
guess on you would write something retarded and NO ONE CAN UNDERSTAND WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON its like you just based this story on needless raping its basically a fic where ppl basically rape one another for gain its shit glad i didnt read pass chapter 1 my god never write again you utterly failed and disgrace writers

6/29/2017 c1 chaos the first primordial
Fuck bruh this shit is a fucking mess bruh

9/14/2016 c1 threads of death
me: naw fuck this shit

2/12/2016 c1 1Xion The XIV
I'm sorry, but this is a horrible story. The plot is EVERYWHERE and Nowhere. The grammar is so horrible you live in America, but I truly believe English is your 3rd language. The rape isn't even tastefully done. I'm afraid to see what other stories you produce or what stories you enjoy if this is your Idea of a good story.

3/31/2015 c1 Guest
i hope you get raped to death by a pschopathic faggot, and that he tortures you to death... i hope you die and that its so painfull that hell would be paradise in comparison... get fucked you worthless shit... oh and tell your mom, wife and daughter i loved pumping cum into them they are real good sluts when it comes to fucking my brains out...

10/27/2014 c8 uzuuchi007
Nice

5/27/2014 c1 Guest
This is the worst story I ever read