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for Megan Ride Prologue, part 1

12/5/2011 c1 4Amandasmiles4ya
This story sounds cool!

Just, a bit of constructive criticism: First off, I noticed their was no summery, you should definitely add one, for future purposes. Also, it was a bit choppy, and could use a bit of work.

But overall, it sounds like a great plot and I'm sure (If you're still updating) it will be awesome.

Looking forward to more :)

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