1/11/2022 c31 1MegaTwilightgirl123
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
(Spoilers so don’t read if not finished)
Every death crushed me. I literally read over each death and had to reread it 3-5xs before believing. This story was GOOD. It can be a real book (idk if it’s based of another series other than twilight characters) but if most of this is your work please do a fifty shades and make novels out of it. You can really stretch out Bella falling for Edward and creating the world. This story can be one book or more, but the characters are all fun yet complex. Edward is ever making mistakes yet earnest which makes James hate of him unfair but very believable. I could go on.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
(Spoilers so don’t read if not finished)
Every death crushed me. I literally read over each death and had to reread it 3-5xs before believing. This story was GOOD. It can be a real book (idk if it’s based of another series other than twilight characters) but if most of this is your work please do a fifty shades and make novels out of it. You can really stretch out Bella falling for Edward and creating the world. This story can be one book or more, but the characters are all fun yet complex. Edward is ever making mistakes yet earnest which makes James hate of him unfair but very believable. I could go on.
12/12/2021 c1 Sciathin Fae
Just so you’re aware, I love this story and make a point to read it once or twice a year since the day you first published a chapter. I would buy this
Just so you’re aware, I love this story and make a point to read it once or twice a year since the day you first published a chapter. I would buy this
12/9/2021 c1 DavidEmiya
ey Lissa I like your story, it's fun, I've been looking for something like this in fanfiction for a long time.
THANK YOU.
I am actually in chapter 7 :)
ey Lissa I like your story, it's fun, I've been looking for something like this in fanfiction for a long time.
THANK YOU.
I am actually in chapter 7 :)
11/30/2021 c1 Andre25
It's been ages re-reading this story, but it keeps coming back as good as ever. Love it!
It's been ages re-reading this story, but it keeps coming back as good as ever. Love it!
10/28/2021 c28 StopTheMadness
Okay you have escaped my wrath. This time. . . You’re on thin fucking ice buddy.
Okay you have escaped my wrath. This time. . . You’re on thin fucking ice buddy.
10/28/2021 c26 StopTheMadness
What!? You better be fucking kidding me. I didn’t become so heavily invested in this story for them to DIE
What!? You better be fucking kidding me. I didn’t become so heavily invested in this story for them to DIE
10/28/2021 c19 StopTheMadness
I can’t believe you did that. For a good part of the chapter I had thought he had DIED
I can’t believe you did that. For a good part of the chapter I had thought he had DIED
10/27/2021 c9 StopTheMadness
What!? Why can’t it be his!? What a fucked thing to say I wanna slap him.
What!? Why can’t it be his!? What a fucked thing to say I wanna slap him.