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10/28/2011 c1 EterNo
it looks interesting. I like it and I would like to continue reading

PD: 8th woman: ayame = ramen XD ^^
10/28/2011 c1 lovesmut
hey man lol nice start

love those 7 ladys :D

i see you have kushina alive in this story . pls if you make narukushi lemon make kushina a woman wo is virgin for sixteen years meaning kushina didnt have sex with any other man aside from minato . it would be a mayor turn off if she had any one night stand and would by totaly out of kushinas character because she would never betray minato
10/28/2011 c1 9Tsukune08
One woman, Ayame, she would totally fill out the story as she could make him (and Kushina) delicious Ichiraku Ramen!

Besides that, nice start though it is a little confusing it was meant to be that way because it is from Naruto's perspective.
10/28/2011 c1 Batros940
Good story idea can't wait to read more.
10/28/2011 c1 Knightoftime
lol so a sorta harem can deal with that lol should be fun...BTW i cant really think of anything to give too you for suggestions or see anything wrong so please continue, also if i didnt like it i would not review or ever read again, not this one i will come back to read
10/28/2011 c1 moose007
I'm suprised he didn't invite Ayame to make ramen. He does consider her family.
10/28/2011 c1 Shadow of the Light Hawk
Like the story so far... am curious on who the 8th woman is
10/28/2011 c1 me
interesting start and i hope you update soon
10/28/2011 c1 daniel 29
Cute story so far and my biggest impression is that kindness backfires. What I mean is that naruto is trying to be kind and gives these 7 women a vacation but he doesn't how potent their love for naruto is Hinata not withstanding.
10/28/2011 c1 Umbra8191
great chapter i can't wait for the next update.
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