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2/23/2013 c8 Me
A 15 year old girl holds hands with her 1 year old son. People call her a slut, no one knows she was raped at 13. People call another Guy fat. No one knows he has a serious disease causing him to be overweight . People call an old man ugly. No one knew he had a serious injury to his face while fighting for our country in the call a women bald but they don't know she has cancer Re-post this if you are against bullying and stereotyping.
Me
P.S. Danniwashere's words not mine
YES I AM AGAINST BULLYING AND STEREOTYPING!
I already said I love the story in my makeout/stakeout review. BUt I still love the story. CHECK THE AUTHOR'S PROFILE PAGE! NOW! IT WAS AWESOME(THIS IS MY OPINION)TO ME!
2/23/2013 c8 Guest
TEAM ADO!
OR.
TEAM ALEK!
I CAN NOT CHOOSE.
BUT.
I WOULD LOVE MORE MAKEOUT/STAKEOUT WITH ADO!
MORE CHAPPIES,please!
I LOVE THIS STORY!
1/2/2013 c8 5Bramblepool
Let me just say, you are an amazing writer. The emotions in this story were perfect, and if there were any grammar errors, I was too into the story to notice. I don't know if you're planning on continuing this, but if you are, PLEASE DO SO SOON. I NEED MORE. so, thankyou for an AMAZING STORY!
1/22/2012 c5 9Citrine Griffin
this, boys and girls, is why Adolf Hitler carried out the murders of 10 million people: He had a broken heart.
1/22/2012 c3 Citrine Griffin
woah...was NOT expecting that!
1/20/2012 c8 fallinginslowmotion
So I just found this, and read it all in one sitting. Although I had certain things to say about certain chapters, I wasn't going to be annoying and review like 10 times, so I'll put it all in one.

*Chapter 2: I was not expecting it to be Adolf Hitler, but that was diffidently a twist! And I like the nickname Ado. c:

*Chatper 3: I like how Ado thought Deryn was actually a girl at first, because is some fics I've read people automatically know that she is actually a she, and it irritates the hell (excuse my language, but it's a pet peeve of mine when people don't stick to the book ideas) outta me because there is in fact a reason that people DON'T realize that she is a girl for so long. BECAUSE SHE IS NOT VERY FEMININE. (well, at least until they find out. then you can tell.) Anywho, I also really liked the idea of Ado's mom not telling him. It sounds like something my mother would so, set me up on a date-like thing. xD

*Chapter 5: Water fights are the PERFECT excuse to flirt. I would know. ;) Still, I liked how both boys really truly acknowledged their feelings for Deryn at the same moment. (is it a ruler thing? haha) And In all truth, it makes sense why Adolf Hitler would fall for a girl like Deryn, she is strong, beautiful, and dangerous. Like him. (Well, maybe not beautiful. It's the mustache... *shiver* By the way does he have the mustache in this?) And that last paragraph just KILLED me. Oh Deryn... we love you, but really? Yeah, ya'll are having TONS of fun. *winkwink*

*Chapter 6: Is Biscuit an anagram for Deryn? Herpyderpderp. :3 (Also, you have made my day by making THE Adolf Hitler say 'rainbows.' Just letting you know.)

*Chapter 7/8: WOAH. THREE KISSES IN ONE NIGHT? DANG GIRL! Okay, sorry for the cap-attack there, but I mean seriously! Deryn is like a like a female womanizer- A MANIZER.

But as for Ado's last soliloquy-type-thing, it all makes sense now! Adolf Hitler became the supposedly all-powerful tyrant to prove his love for Deryn barkin' Sharp! (and if you just got that AVPM reference I did there, I love you. Like seriously. xD ) That would also explain why he attempted to kill everyone who wasn't blonde with blue eyes because Deryn was blonde with blue eyes! You clever-boots you...

-Savannah.
1/8/2012 c8 2Magical Marnie
i swear, im just waiting for Adolf to blow up and have a tantrum :) Deryn should chuck a lamp at his head :)
1/7/2012 c7 cidar
HI! Back again, but the site won't let me review the same chapter more than once, so I'll continue my ramble here.

Sad to her only 3 more chapters, but it's been a wild ride.

I am SOOOOO excited for the showdown, though. Two kisses and Deryn and Alek an item (I think), and Ado in it for blood. Gosh, it's just amazingly suspenseful.

[Aw moment, my dog just laid his head on my foot omg I love my dog so much!]

Back to you.

I'm thrilled for this and for you. I can't wait to see more of this and of your other stuff, and, by the way, gee whiz thanks for the tons of reviews! I 3 you! Now just waiting for some more Alek/Deryna action...

haha no.

but seriously. more.

So all in all, yayzles or whatev, it was really good. You should be proud. I'm on the edge of the finale.
1/7/2012 c8 cidar
Not good? NOT GOOD?

Honey, this is golden. Finally, the conflict we've all known was coming- and the kiss. The drama is insurmountable. Ado following them, Deryn playing everybody, revenge, anger, and then their all around amazingness. BRB I'll review more later
1/7/2012 c8 readytoreview
oh dear...this can only end badly, but it's just to damn good to stop reading. mooooooooooooreeeeeeeeeeeeee!
12/20/2011 c7 Animeteen221
Plz update soon! I'm tearing apart without this!
12/16/2011 c7 LaLa-dragonlover
you should keep writing...i want to know what happens next! :)
11/20/2011 c7 readytoreview
day~yum! There's no more chapters! Oh please oh please oh please update soon! This is way too good to stop here. Get to work, Danni, I'm sooooo anxious for a new chapter!
11/20/2011 c6 readytoreview
two words: holy frick. You mad genius! This is brilliant! And you're killing me with your awesome plot! I really want to finish this. I must stay awake to finish the last chapters.
11/20/2011 c5 readytoreview
wow...a water fight scene, but there was no dogpiles, no sexual tension, and no stripping, but it still played out exceptionally. I applaud you, Danni. This is shaping up to be a very interesting story you're crafting.
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