for Three's a Crowd2/23/2013 c8 Me
A 15 year old girl holds hands with her 1 year old son. People call her a slut, no one knows she was raped at 13. People call another Guy fat. No one knows he has a serious disease causing him to be overweight . People call an old man ugly. No one knew he had a serious injury to his face while fighting for our country in the call a women bald but they don't know she has cancer Re-post this if you are against bullying and stereotyping.
Me
P.S. Danniwashere's words not mine
YES I AM AGAINST BULLYING AND STEREOTYPING!
I already said I love the story in my makeout/stakeout review. BUt I still love the story. CHECK THE AUTHOR'S PROFILE PAGE! NOW! IT WAS AWESOME(THIS IS MY OPINION)TO ME!
A 15 year old girl holds hands with her 1 year old son. People call her a slut, no one knows she was raped at 13. People call another Guy fat. No one knows he has a serious disease causing him to be overweight . People call an old man ugly. No one knew he had a serious injury to his face while fighting for our country in the call a women bald but they don't know she has cancer Re-post this if you are against bullying and stereotyping.
Me
P.S. Danniwashere's words not mine
YES I AM AGAINST BULLYING AND STEREOTYPING!
I already said I love the story in my makeout/stakeout review. BUt I still love the story. CHECK THE AUTHOR'S PROFILE PAGE! NOW! IT WAS AWESOME(THIS IS MY OPINION)TO ME!
2/23/2013 c8 Guest
TEAM ADO!
OR.
TEAM ALEK!
I CAN NOT CHOOSE.
BUT.
I WOULD LOVE MORE MAKEOUT/STAKEOUT WITH ADO!
MORE CHAPPIES,please!
I LOVE THIS STORY!
TEAM ADO!
OR.
TEAM ALEK!
I CAN NOT CHOOSE.
BUT.
I WOULD LOVE MORE MAKEOUT/STAKEOUT WITH ADO!
MORE CHAPPIES,please!
I LOVE THIS STORY!
1/2/2013 c8 
5Bramblepool
Let me just say, you are an amazing writer. The emotions in this story were perfect, and if there were any grammar errors, I was too into the story to notice. I don't know if you're planning on continuing this, but if you are, PLEASE DO SO SOON. I NEED MORE. so, thankyou for an AMAZING STORY!
5BramblepoolLet me just say, you are an amazing writer. The emotions in this story were perfect, and if there were any grammar errors, I was too into the story to notice. I don't know if you're planning on continuing this, but if you are, PLEASE DO SO SOON. I NEED MORE. so, thankyou for an AMAZING STORY!
1/22/2012 c5 9Citrine Griffin
this, boys and girls, is why Adolf Hitler carried out the murders of 10 million people: He had a broken heart.
9Citrine Griffinthis, boys and girls, is why Adolf Hitler carried out the murders of 10 million people: He had a broken heart.
1/20/2012 c8 fallinginslowmotion
So I just found this, and read it all in one sitting. Although I had certain things to say about certain chapters, I wasn't going to be annoying and review like 10 times, so I'll put it all in one.
*Chapter 2: I was not expecting it to be Adolf Hitler, but that was diffidently a twist! And I like the nickname Ado. c:
*Chatper 3: I like how Ado thought Deryn was actually a girl at first, because is some fics I've read people automatically know that she is actually a she, and it irritates the hell (excuse my language, but it's a pet peeve of mine when people don't stick to the book ideas) outta me because there is in fact a reason that people DON'T realize that she is a girl for so long. BECAUSE SHE IS NOT VERY FEMININE. (well, at least until they find out. then you can tell.) Anywho, I also really liked the idea of Ado's mom not telling him. It sounds like something my mother would so, set me up on a date-like thing. xD
*Chapter 5: Water fights are the PERFECT excuse to flirt. I would know. ;) Still, I liked how both boys really truly acknowledged their feelings for Deryn at the same moment. (is it a ruler thing? haha) And In all truth, it makes sense why Adolf Hitler would fall for a girl like Deryn, she is strong, beautiful, and dangerous. Like him. (Well, maybe not beautiful. It's the mustache... *shiver* By the way does he have the mustache in this?) And that last paragraph just KILLED me. Oh Deryn... we love you, but really? Yeah, ya'll are having TONS of fun. *winkwink*
*Chapter 6: Is Biscuit an anagram for Deryn? Herpyderpderp. :3 (Also, you have made my day by making THE Adolf Hitler say 'rainbows.' Just letting you know.)
*Chapter 7/8: WOAH. THREE KISSES IN ONE NIGHT? DANG GIRL! Okay, sorry for the cap-attack there, but I mean seriously! Deryn is like a like a female womanizer- A MANIZER.
But as for Ado's last soliloquy-type-thing, it all makes sense now! Adolf Hitler became the supposedly all-powerful tyrant to prove his love for Deryn barkin' Sharp! (and if you just got that AVPM reference I did there, I love you. Like seriously. xD ) That would also explain why he attempted to kill everyone who wasn't blonde with blue eyes because Deryn was blonde with blue eyes! You clever-boots you...
-Savannah.
So I just found this, and read it all in one sitting. Although I had certain things to say about certain chapters, I wasn't going to be annoying and review like 10 times, so I'll put it all in one.
*Chapter 2: I was not expecting it to be Adolf Hitler, but that was diffidently a twist! And I like the nickname Ado. c:
*Chatper 3: I like how Ado thought Deryn was actually a girl at first, because is some fics I've read people automatically know that she is actually a she, and it irritates the hell (excuse my language, but it's a pet peeve of mine when people don't stick to the book ideas) outta me because there is in fact a reason that people DON'T realize that she is a girl for so long. BECAUSE SHE IS NOT VERY FEMININE. (well, at least until they find out. then you can tell.) Anywho, I also really liked the idea of Ado's mom not telling him. It sounds like something my mother would so, set me up on a date-like thing. xD
*Chapter 5: Water fights are the PERFECT excuse to flirt. I would know. ;) Still, I liked how both boys really truly acknowledged their feelings for Deryn at the same moment. (is it a ruler thing? haha) And In all truth, it makes sense why Adolf Hitler would fall for a girl like Deryn, she is strong, beautiful, and dangerous. Like him. (Well, maybe not beautiful. It's the mustache... *shiver* By the way does he have the mustache in this?) And that last paragraph just KILLED me. Oh Deryn... we love you, but really? Yeah, ya'll are having TONS of fun. *winkwink*
*Chapter 6: Is Biscuit an anagram for Deryn? Herpyderpderp. :3 (Also, you have made my day by making THE Adolf Hitler say 'rainbows.' Just letting you know.)
*Chapter 7/8: WOAH. THREE KISSES IN ONE NIGHT? DANG GIRL! Okay, sorry for the cap-attack there, but I mean seriously! Deryn is like a like a female womanizer- A MANIZER.
But as for Ado's last soliloquy-type-thing, it all makes sense now! Adolf Hitler became the supposedly all-powerful tyrant to prove his love for Deryn barkin' Sharp! (and if you just got that AVPM reference I did there, I love you. Like seriously. xD ) That would also explain why he attempted to kill everyone who wasn't blonde with blue eyes because Deryn was blonde with blue eyes! You clever-boots you...
-Savannah.
1/8/2012 c8 2Magical Marnie
i swear, im just waiting for Adolf to blow up and have a tantrum :) Deryn should chuck a lamp at his head :)
2Magical Marniei swear, im just waiting for Adolf to blow up and have a tantrum :) Deryn should chuck a lamp at his head :)
1/7/2012 c7 cidar
HI! Back again, but the site won't let me review the same chapter more than once, so I'll continue my ramble here.
Sad to her only 3 more chapters, but it's been a wild ride.
I am SOOOOO excited for the showdown, though. Two kisses and Deryn and Alek an item (I think), and Ado in it for blood. Gosh, it's just amazingly suspenseful.
[Aw moment, my dog just laid his head on my foot omg I love my dog so much!]
Back to you.
I'm thrilled for this and for you. I can't wait to see more of this and of your other stuff, and, by the way, gee whiz thanks for the tons of reviews! I 3 you! Now just waiting for some more Alek/Deryna action...
haha no.
but seriously. more.
So all in all, yayzles or whatev, it was really good. You should be proud. I'm on the edge of the finale.
HI! Back again, but the site won't let me review the same chapter more than once, so I'll continue my ramble here.
Sad to her only 3 more chapters, but it's been a wild ride.
I am SOOOOO excited for the showdown, though. Two kisses and Deryn and Alek an item (I think), and Ado in it for blood. Gosh, it's just amazingly suspenseful.
[Aw moment, my dog just laid his head on my foot omg I love my dog so much!]
Back to you.
I'm thrilled for this and for you. I can't wait to see more of this and of your other stuff, and, by the way, gee whiz thanks for the tons of reviews! I 3 you! Now just waiting for some more Alek/Deryna action...
haha no.
but seriously. more.
So all in all, yayzles or whatev, it was really good. You should be proud. I'm on the edge of the finale.
1/7/2012 c8 cidar
Not good? NOT GOOD?
Honey, this is golden. Finally, the conflict we've all known was coming- and the kiss. The drama is insurmountable. Ado following them, Deryn playing everybody, revenge, anger, and then their all around amazingness. BRB I'll review more later
Not good? NOT GOOD?
Honey, this is golden. Finally, the conflict we've all known was coming- and the kiss. The drama is insurmountable. Ado following them, Deryn playing everybody, revenge, anger, and then their all around amazingness. BRB I'll review more later
1/7/2012 c8 readytoreview
oh dear...this can only end badly, but it's just to damn good to stop reading. mooooooooooooreeeeeeeeeeeeee!
oh dear...this can only end badly, but it's just to damn good to stop reading. mooooooooooooreeeeeeeeeeeeee!
12/20/2011 c7 Animeteen221
Plz update soon! I'm tearing apart without this!
Plz update soon! I'm tearing apart without this!
11/20/2011 c7 readytoreview
day~yum! There's no more chapters! Oh please oh please oh please update soon! This is way too good to stop here. Get to work, Danni, I'm sooooo anxious for a new chapter!
day~yum! There's no more chapters! Oh please oh please oh please update soon! This is way too good to stop here. Get to work, Danni, I'm sooooo anxious for a new chapter!
11/20/2011 c6 readytoreview
two words: holy frick. You mad genius! This is brilliant! And you're killing me with your awesome plot! I really want to finish this. I must stay awake to finish the last chapters.
two words: holy frick. You mad genius! This is brilliant! And you're killing me with your awesome plot! I really want to finish this. I must stay awake to finish the last chapters.
11/20/2011 c5 readytoreview
wow...a water fight scene, but there was no dogpiles, no sexual tension, and no stripping, but it still played out exceptionally. I applaud you, Danni. This is shaping up to be a very interesting story you're crafting.
wow...a water fight scene, but there was no dogpiles, no sexual tension, and no stripping, but it still played out exceptionally. I applaud you, Danni. This is shaping up to be a very interesting story you're crafting.