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9/3/2014 c10 SpArKiE37
Awesome story.
6/23/2014 c1 16freefall-gypsy
do you have a Friend code for the 3DS if so my friend code is 0989 - 2084 - 7135
4/24/2014 c10 Cersesi
I like it.
4/12/2013 c10 17icypika
Awesome Job.
2/20/2013 c10 Maximum
Rather unusual.
9/22/2012 c10 1They call me Bruce
Did you get the idea for Charmeleon from Boy George's song Karma Chameleon?
9/20/2012 c10 1Sir Thames
Interesting fanfic, mate. Carry on.
9/19/2012 c10 Radio Driver
Good going, Ash. Keep on keepin on.
9/19/2012 c10 1Rocco13
Nice freaking fanfic.
9/19/2012 c10 29Screaming Dean
I'm happy to see you doing so well. Keep up the good work.
9/18/2012 c10 luger 7
A most excellent fanfic. Party on, dude.
8/28/2012 c9 15SlipknotGhidorah
Ha, this is a great story with Ash choosing to be Ashley. Still, when she does get old enough, I am curious on who she will want to go after in the male department. Gary perhaps?
5/30/2012 c3 10JohnStang
I am sorry for saying this inside a review but I am finding myself having to skip the first 20 or so lines of each chapter so far. Those lines pertain to the name of this fic, summary, disclaimer, and author notes. Simply put the way you did them just GLARES out too much. You do not really need to BOLD and UNDERLINE the whole thing just keywords.
Please dont get me wrong. I am thoroughly enjoying this peice.
I just cant take the first 20 or so lines is all for it hurts my eyes.
5/26/2012 c9 41uncutetomboy
Looking good, TJ. Just try to use the term "said" less; use more expressive adjectives like "murmured", "giggled", "whined", "inquired", etc. Also, more detail wouldn't go amiss.

Lor
4/2/2012 c9 1They call me Bruce
Nice update.
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