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3/29 c1 Guest
A very disturbing and insightful piece! I find it chillingly believable, and there is a certain balance to it... an evening of the scales. I love how it's not even evil, not really, it's fair in a brutal way. And most of all I love how you show it unfolding and the effects that suppressed knowledge had on Hiccup. Bravo!
7/18/2020 c1 weeathamandjam
Holy crap this story hit me right in the feels. As much as I hate to admit it, this is not beyond the realm of possibility. You are a talented and twisted writer, excellent job! :-D

Now I just have to figure out how to delete someone else's story from the internet.
4/16/2019 c1 Guest
I agree with this story. Because after the third movie revealed Toothless’s friendship with Hiccup was fake, it makes sense the dragon only viewed the boy as a tool or something “in the meantime” until he found an out. I feel sad Toothless had us fooled all this time. Just because he acted cute and innocent didn’t mean he was. Excellent storytelling!
4/3/2019 c1 16Yuri Namikaze1
Oh my gosh, that would be so messed up. I love Toothless, but if I was Hiccup, there’s no way I could trust him after that. I feel like there’s a difference, because they were friends when Toothless did that.
9/4/2017 c1 King of the Souls
that was amazing
1/19/2017 c1 10CosmicEssence
Definitely gave me a chill, especially since it could be true! But well I'm gonna pretend it aint cause I like the idea it was basic karma and a chance for the 'gods' or whatever to allow them t properly bond say...rather than this.
7/15/2016 c1 4GrecianHeart
I will never look at Toothless the same way.
4/14/2016 c1 6Dragons and Dragons
Wow ... creepy. I mean, I've always thought tht it kind of was fitting, that Hiccup was short one leg and Toothless one tailfin. Plus there was that line in the second movie that joikingly said something like this story "But you got me back, didn't you bud. You couldn't save all of me either." But even so, the idea that Toothless meant that ... never ever crossed my mind, in any way shape or form. At all. Tis is kind of disturbing. I love it.
11/12/2015 c1 Great
Oh my, that was disturbing and yet awesome! Too bad dragons havent learned "An eye for an eye makes the world blind!" Looking forward to more!
8/26/2015 c1 39Sedentary Wordsmith
Oh my. Amazing! This is a really interesting idea. I wonder, though, if Toothless actually knows that Hiccup was the one who injured him. Most fans seem to accept that he does, but I don't know how he would, unless he's that intelligent to perfectly understand human speech when Hiccup says it's his fault. Which is possible, I guess.
Either way, great story! It was chilling and foreboding and your characterization of Toothless at the end was downright disturbing. I loved it.

-Word
7/30/2015 c1 Guest
jesus flippin Christ...
7/24/2015 c1 Deanfan4ever123
Wow. That was just. I have no words. Well, I guess amazing works. That was just brilliant.. I've never come across a story like this one! And the best part was I sort of guessed what was coming halfway through, and just kept denying it.. It certainly made me a little afraid of toothless... Amazing work!
4/3/2015 c1 Guest
Uh...

Um... Wh— Uh...
...
You. Are. Demonic. Lady.
Spirit of Fury
P.S. Still very cool.
3/22/2015 c1 16I heart the Hitachiin twins
Hmm... A bit OCC of Toothless, I'm a little reminded of the fics where Toothless isn't exactly sure why he likes Hiccup as much as he does, or when he is majorly obsessive.
11/21/2014 c1 Guest
You're a good writer, but I hate this idea. How could you write this?
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