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6/24/2018 c1 4phieillydinyia
woah
5/31/2012 c1 6owlhero
I never thought it would be Bailey. Very surprising. Very moving.

I have personel experience and this nails the feelings when it comes to families worried about going to war and the fear of losing family members.

Perfect use of sunlight and rain as metaphors for hapiness and sadiness.
3/4/2012 c1 2ForeverKaybree
I can't believe that anyone hasn't left a review on this because this story deserves some serious props!I wrote a poems similar to this one a while back,but mine is in no comparison to yours.This is just wonderful and I also sent this to my choir teacher and she actually cried relating to this with her relationship with her own husband.Well done,from the both of us.

Kaykayz

P.S.Please PM me with some writing tips,please!

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