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7/3 c4 1bibink729
7/3 c4 bibink729
2/11 c2 hitsdifferent
trash plot

3/27/2023 c2 DarkHunter10
Ok, well... This one is confusing... Why would the third POSSIBLY want naruto dead? Him being the "child of prophesy" and the ONLY deterrent to iwa or cloud coming to butcher the village... It just doesn't make a heck of a lot of sense... (and that's even forgetting if sarutobi knew about the "masked man" and that NONE of the shinobi in the village have a CHANCE against him, EXCEPT for naruto... Whom minato specifically empowered to fight)... Just seems very 'head scratching". As for his "pranks"? Then why not assign him a TEACHER? Besides didn't the pranks STOP after he became a shinobi? And finally... If sarutobi is having problems "keeping the peace"... Then wtf was the point of telling everybody anyway? Wouldn't it have been smarter to just not say a word except that "the beast has been dealt with"?

In a LOT of these stories, you almost gotta wonder if the third is actually working AGAINST the leaf, instead of for it... It would certainly make a lot of his decisions easier to understand. Nobody can continuously make the WRONG decision, every single time the opportunity presents itself, without it being on purpose.
6/14/2021 c2 Guest
man absolutely the best op naruto fanfic ive seen . hope there are morre chpters soon
1/24/2021 c4 jamarionlittle11305
When will the next chapter be
6/20/2020 c2 jackmylad 2
Your other version of this story was better you sucks and should go back to the other version of this story you loser
6/22/2019 c4 4Monster King
Great job please continue
6/1/2019 c1 Guest
Why not kill kakashi since there is NO way he could have POSSIBLY ran far enough from "ground zero" in the time he had and the injuries sustained... It's not really believable.
6/1/2019 c2 Guest
Why NOT kill kakashi and sasuke? Wouldn't that have made quite a bit more sense here?
4/20/2019 c4 god of all
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
4/16/2019 c1 Gamma-X
Translation for Seishougan?
11/26/2018 c1 Cameron Jordan
Can you please go to the original one and call this something else because the other one was better
7/28/2018 c4 Guest
Please Change the name and continue the old one its way better that way and the plot was good in the old one this just doesn't have the same feel
11/13/2017 c4 christopherrhaydon
Please update ASAP!
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