for When the Clock Strikes Twelve5/4/2012 c2 spica14
i like reading both chapters. i thinks they're good one-shots. i'm just wondering about what u said in your author's note on the 1st chapter, the one regaring making a series with this title. do u mean it's a series of one shots or really a series. u know with only one plot. i'm just a litle curious. i would love to read a series with this title i think it will be interesting.
i like reading both chapters. i thinks they're good one-shots. i'm just wondering about what u said in your author's note on the 1st chapter, the one regaring making a series with this title. do u mean it's a series of one shots or really a series. u know with only one plot. i'm just a litle curious. i would love to read a series with this title i think it will be interesting.
1/9/2012 c2 mysterious me
is mikan cheating on ruka?
is mikan cheating on ruka?
1/9/2012 c2 Silvermist76
Heyaa T :D
Thanks for the dedication, hun. Wowiee it feels like I haven't dedicated anything to since ages O.o
Anyways, was this the ballroom scene you had in your mind? I liked this, though I think you should've added more details, you know? By making him seem a bit more mysterious. But anyways, I liked this drabble. It was cute :)
'Mikan understood it all though. "Why would you want to go somewhere else? Come on Permy, it'll be fun!" - Err, I don't get the understood it all though part. It's a contradiction to what she says later on.
'she did looked ready except that she kept messing with her hair.' Tense mishap. It should be she did 'look' not 'looked.'
'It was a boy in a tuxedo and black mask with a faint whisker design who turned look at her.' - It was a boy donned in a tuxedo,on his face he wore a black mask which had a faint whisker design embarked on it. He turned to look at her. I guess that sounds a bit better? Sorry for going all grammar Nazi on you, it's because of the SATs -_-
The ending was cheesy, but hey-my endings are normally really cheessy too!- so light cakes. (Apparently Ritwik made that phrase up haha and like everyone uses it now)
Keep writing!
And oh, dude you should totally write a RukaxHotaru drabble for this :D
~Silvermist76
Heyaa T :D
Thanks for the dedication, hun. Wowiee it feels like I haven't dedicated anything to since ages O.o
Anyways, was this the ballroom scene you had in your mind? I liked this, though I think you should've added more details, you know? By making him seem a bit more mysterious. But anyways, I liked this drabble. It was cute :)
'Mikan understood it all though. "Why would you want to go somewhere else? Come on Permy, it'll be fun!" - Err, I don't get the understood it all though part. It's a contradiction to what she says later on.
'she did looked ready except that she kept messing with her hair.' Tense mishap. It should be she did 'look' not 'looked.'
'It was a boy in a tuxedo and black mask with a faint whisker design who turned look at her.' - It was a boy donned in a tuxedo,on his face he wore a black mask which had a faint whisker design embarked on it. He turned to look at her. I guess that sounds a bit better? Sorry for going all grammar Nazi on you, it's because of the SATs -_-
The ending was cheesy, but hey-my endings are normally really cheessy too!- so light cakes. (Apparently Ritwik made that phrase up haha and like everyone uses it now)
Keep writing!
And oh, dude you should totally write a RukaxHotaru drabble for this :D
~Silvermist76
1/8/2012 c2 
2PurpleMonsterXoX
this is so good=w=my bff had the same halloween dress =D you should make more!
2PurpleMonsterXoXthis is so good=w=my bff had the same halloween dress =D you should make more!
11/6/2011 c1 Emily of the Forest
Aww I totally loved Youichi here!
This was a super cute halloween story.
I can't wait till you update this drabble series!
Okay, now I gotta go read Silvermist's story .
Good job!
Aww I totally loved Youichi here!
This was a super cute halloween story.
I can't wait till you update this drabble series!
Okay, now I gotta go read Silvermist's story .
Good job!
11/5/2011 c1 Too Kewl For You
soo good! i'm so glad u n silvermist r writing such amazing one-shots!pls continuee! :D
i can't wait for ur next update!
and wen will u guys update its a boy girl thing? i'm waiting to read the next chapter of that!
:D
soo good! i'm so glad u n silvermist r writing such amazing one-shots!pls continuee! :D
i can't wait for ur next update!
and wen will u guys update its a boy girl thing? i'm waiting to read the next chapter of that!
:D
11/2/2011 c1 July Passion
Good story! It was awesome! lol. ( Can't wait for you guys to update it's a boy girl thing too.!) Anyway Awesome story! I really liked it a ton!
Good story! It was awesome! lol. ( Can't wait for you guys to update it's a boy girl thing too.!) Anyway Awesome story! I really liked it a ton!
11/1/2011 c1 1Bluena-Azul
This is the best gakuen alice halloween fanfic ive evr known hope that you make a christmas one too!
1Bluena-AzulThis is the best gakuen alice halloween fanfic ive evr known hope that you make a christmas one too!
11/1/2011 c1 RaNdOm
waiitt who is her bf?
waiitt who is her bf?