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3/16/2014 c42 1akitty
Hello! Just wanted to say I'm looking forward to the rest of this story, please keep writing!
3/4/2014 c42 3RandomGerman
Please post your next chapter soon even if you are going to change things later. I reread everything you changed in the story and I love how you added detail and depth to the storyline. Youre a great writer and this is by far my favorite story about Harry -ever. I cant wait to read more, but I understand your reasoning.
3/3/2014 c37 RandomGerman
I am impressed with all the rework you pjt into the story. It has even more detail now and I enjoyed reading everything again.
2/22/2014 c42 6SeriouslySiriusPadfoot
I've read this story in record time... and its feb of 2014. Hoping for an update even if its a tiny chapter...
I really love this story and with the last chapter I get the feeling Harry is constantly suffering the end of his first day of 6th grade.

I'm not demanding an update NOW, (like Emily Poter would) but I would kindly appreciate another interaction with Snape because, well, I adore my Head of House. And I need more of this amazing story!
I love how you write all of the characters and you have a very original and precise voice for Harry. I adored Samuel and cried with little Harry when he was murdered by that bumbling walrus that is Mr. Dursley. Ritter is absolutely my favorite character and you even made me like Draco! Thank you for writing this and giving Harry someone like Max to guide him through the Wizarding World. Kudos on Golbin interactions, very fun to read. For once they like someone, sort of.

Best of luck and hope you find plenty of free time to post.

Faded Electric, the Silver lined Slytherin.

P.S. The only reason I mentioned the short time in which I read the story is so you know I'm hooked.
2/14/2014 c42 00
Update please.
2/10/2014 c41 Valheru1988
great story so far, good luck on life settling down so you can figure out the yay for story alert so i don't have to keep checking back, heh.
2/3/2014 c42 1bmhallows
eagerly awaiting your updates- will wait as long as needed!
2/2/2014 c42 mogeta5
I just found this story and read all chapters in one go.
I'm looking forward to your next update.
1/25/2014 c42 cha0sw0lf
Can't wait for more and really can't wait for hogwarts
1/15/2014 c42 8Living-In-Bliss
This is very interesting. I like the idea of Harry having an affinity for botany. It's an interesting twist on his character, though I'll admit to being devastated when Samuel died, but I fell in love with Max from the very start. The type of character 'normal people' wouldn't look to for companionship, yet you won't find a stronger friendship. I also I might add, that I do feel very guilty after reading this fic, not 20 minutes after receiving a bunch of cut flowers. I've personally always enjoyed potted/planted flowers but you can't really keep them inside. Anyway, I did want to add that while the whole, teacher/adult/person instantly hating Harry for what they've heard has slightly become a big of a drag in this fic, what with the headmaster, Emily and now this teacher, I'm interested to see how it will compare when Harry has no means of escaping her. Because to be honest, I doubt that your Harry will look to the principal or anyone to swap teachers. I can't wait to see how this fic will progress, especially into Hogwarts. I have no idea if the house poll is still up but I'd like to add in my two bits for it. I've voted for Slytherin and I'd like to mention why. I know that both Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw are both ahead in the poll (as of now) but I can't feel that they are Harry. While Hufflepuff, may be a more comfortable setting than some of the other houses, I do not think that he would be able to survive with them. Much like the Gryffindor's I believe that they are too chatty and personal for him. I doubt that they'd let him be Harry and would follow him around everywhere, also Harry has shown an affinity for avoiding people that have no character. In my mind the Hufflepuff's that Harry go to school with seem too cliquey and I can't see Harry getting on with them at all. For Ravenclaw, I can't imagine that Harry could live with them. Harry isn't knowledgeable simply for the sake of it. Harry learns what he is interested in (and for the sakes of staying at school). I cannot see Harry's personality reflected in Ravenclaw, he isn't striving for knowledge for the sake of being a book worm or a know-it-all. He learns for himself, not to show off. Also Gryffindor is just a no. I couldn't even imagine this Harry being a Gryff. They are far too loud, in your face and slightly arrogant for him to be comfortable around. He couldn't be the quiet boy he is around them, they would pester him and just no. Whereas in Slytherin, Harry would have his friendship with Draco, the solitude he needs. Harry would be able to bloom without being pulled this way and that and wouldn't be set up as the golden boy of perfection ready to fight the evil like he would in Gryffindor. Harry has Max's muggles or fucking muggles idea. So I think that once he got into Slytherin and explained that theory/idea, he would not only fit in because of his dislike for certain muggles, but also not feel that he must instantly jump to protect muggles. He has too much knowledge to do that. Also I think that his parseltongue abilities would flourish to the point that one day he might have a familiar or another snake as a friend. I would also like to add that while "not at Hogwarts" is above Slytherin I cannot find it appropriate for this story. While it would be interesting to see him at Beauxbatons to see him improve his french, I cannot see him there. Besides I would personally find it disappointing after all of the interactions between Hogwarts figures that I would sorely miss seeing their reactions to his identity. Not to mention the fact that I'd like to see a bit where Harry stays over at Draco's for a bit and Max comes to pick him up. I would love to see not only Draco's reaction to Max but a conversation between him and Lucius. I'm also curious as to what house Max was/would have been in at Hogwarts. I could imagine a scene where Max is telling Harry about the houses and he mentions the fact that he was a Slytherin. or in a letter or something. I don't know. Anyway I'll stop this insanely long review by letting you know that I thoroughly enjoy this fic and cannot wait to read more :)
1/13/2014 c37 7devilsama666
I have to say , Petunia lives in her own make-believe ( Dudley not liking violence) , i hate her less but still what she think was certainly stupid in the chapters before. Well , good job there ! Hope you udpate soon! I do not like mrs Shew at all ( dislike her as much as i dislike Emily ! )
lazyass out!
1/12/2014 c42 devilsama666
Don't worry, take the time you need .Still i will be waiting impatiently, i wish you luck !
lazyass out!
1/12/2014 c41 devilsama666
Poor Harry, i can say that it will be very hard, i think i don't like Shew very much , what's with her bias and judjing before meeting ! Good job tough , keep it up !
lazyass out!
1/12/2014 c40 devilsama666
Is Harry getting a crush on her ? If that's so it will suck . I didn't see that comming , i had a feeling but i never thoug , the woman walking in woulb mrs Shew! Good job!
lazyass out.
1/12/2014 c39 devilsama666
is it the fammily of Fleur ? Anyway good job. I liked this chapter as much as the others, you made some mistakes one the french speaking but there were few ! Here , allow me to correct you:
"Comment avons nous pus nous perdre"
"N'importe qui ce serait perdu"
"pourquoi devions nous venir dans cet endroit puant!Les moldues sont partout."
"...Dois-je te rappeler que tu est celle qui voulais allez explorer..."
Hope this helped, keep doing a good job!
lazyass out!
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