12/25/2016 c12 Bulgeundal89aol
I LOVE IT. I hope you update it
I LOVE IT. I hope you update it
7/29/2012 c12 Allycat
Update soon this is funny and will she become a knight?
Update soon this is funny and will she become a knight?
6/15/2012 c12 35Yoruko Rhapsodos
... Poor Roxanne! The torture needs to stop! & effect of an arm or no, Alviss is automatically disqualified as able to be paired with her for forgetting her.
... Poor Roxanne! The torture needs to stop! & effect of an arm or no, Alviss is automatically disqualified as able to be paired with her for forgetting her.
1/25/2012 c12 3Christella58
Hey, the story's not bad! I'm actually really intrigued!
Keep writing ^_^
Hey, the story's not bad! I'm actually really intrigued!
Keep writing ^_^
1/8/2012 c12 3heartarrow56
Aw, I would be mad if I was Roxanne too. Dont use a kid as a shield! Anywho, I guess Roxanne is out for a couple of chapters. Cant wait to see what's next! Update soon! ^o^
Aw, I would be mad if I was Roxanne too. Dont use a kid as a shield! Anywho, I guess Roxanne is out for a couple of chapters. Cant wait to see what's next! Update soon! ^o^
1/8/2012 c11 heartarrow56
Oi, so Roxanne turns into a cat when she's controlled! I knew it! (Didnt really know, just said that i did) I guess Roxanne is gonna have to stay in the Chess for a little longer. Tsk, too bad someone like Phantom has so much control over her. Well, update soon! ^o^
Oi, so Roxanne turns into a cat when she's controlled! I knew it! (Didnt really know, just said that i did) I guess Roxanne is gonna have to stay in the Chess for a little longer. Tsk, too bad someone like Phantom has so much control over her. Well, update soon! ^o^
12/23/2011 c10 1Mirakira98
Yay! I'm so glad you updated. Younger Alviss is so cute! I hope you continue the story soon!
Yay! I'm so glad you updated. Younger Alviss is so cute! I hope you continue the story soon!
12/19/2011 c10 3heartarrow56
D'AW! Alviss said it was cute. :3 Well, anyway, I liked the memory scenes Roxanne had. Poor onii-san. (I don't remember his name at the moment) Did he die, or did he go to the Chess willingly? Or I guess unwillingly is an option also. Well, update soon! ^o^
D'AW! Alviss said it was cute. :3 Well, anyway, I liked the memory scenes Roxanne had. Poor onii-san. (I don't remember his name at the moment) Did he die, or did he go to the Chess willingly? Or I guess unwillingly is an option also. Well, update soon! ^o^
12/18/2011 c9 heartarrow56
Oh no! Roxanne is bi-polar! Just kidding! But seriously, I wonder what that whole red eye thing was about. I didn't pay too much attention to it before. Anywho, Girom, the guy who hates women, and Roxanne, the girl who have lately been a little on edge not to mention he's her rival and vise versa. Thia should be interesting. Well, can't wait for an update! ^o^
Oh no! Roxanne is bi-polar! Just kidding! But seriously, I wonder what that whole red eye thing was about. I didn't pay too much attention to it before. Anywho, Girom, the guy who hates women, and Roxanne, the girl who have lately been a little on edge not to mention he's her rival and vise versa. Thia should be interesting. Well, can't wait for an update! ^o^
12/17/2011 c8 1Mirakira98
That was a great chapter. I love how you made her powerwalk instead of run HA!
That was a great chapter. I love how you made her powerwalk instead of run HA!
12/17/2011 c8 3heartarrow56
Ooh! I wonder who this person is! Good thing Roxanne was able to slow the process down. If it's not ahort term six year memory loss, WHAT IS IT? DUN DUN DUUUN! Well, I don't mind long author's notes. I'm pretty guilty myself of long ones if I have something to talk about. Well, update soon! Which I'm sure you will! ^o^
Ooh! I wonder who this person is! Good thing Roxanne was able to slow the process down. If it's not ahort term six year memory loss, WHAT IS IT? DUN DUN DUUUN! Well, I don't mind long author's notes. I'm pretty guilty myself of long ones if I have something to talk about. Well, update soon! Which I'm sure you will! ^o^
12/16/2011 c7 3heartarrow56
Oooh! Ed almost found out! But seriously, what's up with these guys and their short term, six year, memory loss? First Alviss doesn't remember, now Ed. Ah well. I think that we should see a bit more of what Roxanne is up to but don't disregard Ginta and co. completely. Well, can't wait to see what's next! Update soon! ^o^
Oooh! Ed almost found out! But seriously, what's up with these guys and their short term, six year, memory loss? First Alviss doesn't remember, now Ed. Ah well. I think that we should see a bit more of what Roxanne is up to but don't disregard Ginta and co. completely. Well, can't wait to see what's next! Update soon! ^o^
12/13/2011 c6 heartarrow56
Pffft. Your writing isn't crappy. Anyway, of course Alviss wouldn't remember her, even if they were face to face. -_- *sigh* Well, can't wait for Roxanne's fight! Update soon! ^o^
Pffft. Your writing isn't crappy. Anyway, of course Alviss wouldn't remember her, even if they were face to face. -_- *sigh* Well, can't wait for Roxanne's fight! Update soon! ^o^
12/12/2011 c5 heartarrow56
Poor Roxanne. Im glad she ws able to save those kids! And Alviss doesnt remember a thing about her...the flashback was sad too. Dont worry about reviews. MAR isnt a really big popular manga/anime, so not a lot of people knows about it. Im sure someone will review soon! Well, update soon!
Poor Roxanne. Im glad she ws able to save those kids! And Alviss doesnt remember a thing about her...the flashback was sad too. Dont worry about reviews. MAR isnt a really big popular manga/anime, so not a lot of people knows about it. Im sure someone will review soon! Well, update soon!